Reviews for Help Me or Hold My Hand
JC-Saved-Me chapter 1 . 11/16/2004
Aw i feel like this right now...:( i feel so unloved by every1 rite now...includin my bf!
LegendaryPunk29 chapter 1 . 11/5/2004
I dunno y, but right now, these kind of poetry gets me very very emotional...I dunno y, but it just does..Great poem, just like usual work of urs. If I could, I would deffinitely go hold ur hands... U r an awsome girl. Keep writing, u r an amazing writer... btw, did u get new Simple Plan CD? its awsome and totally kicks ass
catseyeview chapter 1 . 11/5/2004
Definitely "Hold my Hand" it leaves as you do in the end, hope...
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 10/31/2004
yipie! it lets me review! nice poem, sorry it took so lnog to review.
u-will-never-know chapter 1 . 10/30/2004
Aw so cool... Then again, i dont expect any less from you ;). I like the rhyming and emotion you've put into it :D
Cinnamon Zo chapter 1 . 10/29/2004
Love it. *Sigh* I know the feeling... just wishing he would notice and help me... Great job, CZ
Sarah-Angel87 chapter 1 . 10/29/2004
I think the title should be hold my hand. its a great poem I really like how it seems to be very natural, as if it just came out without a second thought about it. I think it would be more effective in stanzas though, but other then thats it really is great!
swift sky silver chapter 1 . 10/29/2004
wow. i can feel the emotion put into this poem. wonderfully expressed. keep it up 0)