Reviews for Macbethly
LuthienLuin chapter 1 . 12/17/2004
Nice rhymes. Compact, tight, clear yet makes you think. I love the lines: "But sore heart doth resent / When words freely flow / Turns blue into crimson / And sun into snow." I love Macbeth and this added so nicely to it.
F-Core chapter 1 . 11/14/2004
Very cool. I just finished reading Macbeth and that was one of my favorite lines too
Rose-Dreamer chapter 1 . 11/11/2004
Wow! I loved this poem...The wording really seems so...*Shakespearean*, but i'm guessing that was the point. well goo job anyhow!
nick-wordsmith chapter 1 . 11/1/2004
Wow, nice one. I can't think of a decent title, my only suggestion would be to use one of the less-influnecial-but-crucial lines. If one exists. Anyway your writing just gets better and better.
Stones decay, words last
Nick
PS: I really should get a new signiture phrase...
Death-By-Papercut chapter 1 . 10/30/2004
i like the language...its good