Reviews for Give it back!
MercuryMoon chapter 1 . 6/24/2005
This sounds like it could be a prologue to a longer story. Maybe you could try that one day? I think it'd turn out quite nicely. Anyway, the poem was very cool. I liked it. -
philoslove chapter 1 . 11/27/2004
Hm, lovely poem for a first attempt, I should say. But one thing, maybe it's just me, but... I felt the rhythm was a little awkward. Perhaps the iambic pentameter thing is just... it just doesn't flow. But other than that, the descriptions are vivid and very pretty.
Eraasay chapter 1 . 11/26/2004
Yes! It worked! My stupid, nefarious, ficle computer will sometimes let me send a review nad sometimes make this enfuriating beep and not let me. But this time it did, so I better make it count! Cool poem! I liked it. Love the outdoors. Wish it was longer, though... Bye! ...better go and do any more reviewing I want before the darn computer changes its coniving mind...
tiger chapter 1 . 10/31/2004
I think this is a very nice poem especially for a first time.
tahayov chapter 1 . 10/30/2004
well it sounds good for ur first poem.. you know what u wanna write about and u go straight at it..nice attitude..just practise more and ull be great im sure