|Reviews for Standing On Half A Broken Heart|
| Charlottes-pen chapter 1 . 11/14/2004
It's different than the other ones, but the emotions are always so raw. I dunno, I like this one, but it seems to lack some of the abstractness of your other works. But it's just different. The second and third lines are my favorite, perhaps because of the uniqueness of the word arrangement.
and this voice inside of my head,
it would enlighten you to know
rather than "you would be enlightened to know" It's fantastic.