Reviews for s i g h
O. Usus chapter 1 . 11/10/2004
cool! i like that you've stripped it to the bone, but anyone can feel there's more to it. the meaning i see in it may be different to the one you intended, but that's peotry, once you write something and put it out there it's open to interpretation. if you want to make the meaning more obvious youb need to add just a little detail. is there one voice or two, what does the last line mean? but i still like it a lot. :)