Reviews for Tried and True
Setsuna529 chapter 1 . 4/27/2005
Repetition and rhyming worked well for this. Depressing, but a lot of stuff I can relate to. Great work.
Cassandra le Reille chapter 1 . 12/24/2004
In an attempt to refrain from using a generic complimentary word, I am going to refer to the quality of this piece as "spifftacular." Yeah, that's right. This was spifftacular.

Even without much imagery (which is usually my favourite part of any work), this was rather... charming, I suppose, in and of itself. It holds a certain appeal. I think I'll take a particular liking to it.
Scarlet Azalea chapter 1 . 11/2/2004
I really like the way you use a whole bunch of juxtaposed ideas in a whole string of couplets.
I just hope it doesn't reflect your own real feelings about life! It's rather morbid...
nick-wordsmith chapter 1 . 11/1/2004
I love it! The way the rhying couplets are contradictory... it's great. Going on favourites.
Stones decay, words last
Nick
Death-By-Papercut chapter 1 . 10/31/2004
this is sad...but a good poem...it flowed nicely...good job