Reviews for Destiny
JR Gringo chapter 1 . 1/11/2006
The future huh? Interesting topic and word choice. BTW, good decision changing the first line, "Unchangeable life" would sound too hopeless for the "happy-future-you-can't-wait-for" mood here.
Devil6667 chapter 1 . 3/20/2005
i like this... it's very... i can't describe it, but i like it
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/2/2005
oo very true and well done
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 1/1/2005
Roller-coaster slide,

Accelerations quite diverse,

Our life's universe. —m—
David Stephen chapter 1 . 1/1/2005
Once again Brill!~DS~
Endless Nightmares chapter 1 . 12/31/2004
I liked it. Very good one.
Fairy Tale Lies chapter 1 . 11/11/2004
Oh, swellness. That was lovley. :D:D
SeaVoi chapter 1 . 11/9/2004
That pretty much sums it up, I like it. Its cool!
Honey Nut Loop and m-j chapter 1 . 11/2/2004
That's quite scary because i wrote a haiku only the other day on that same theme. Couldn't get it to work in a way i liked though so i didn't post it.
That's a really great haiku.