Reviews for When Least Wanted
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 11/9/2004
i likes! nice writing dude ;)
twilightwriter07 chapter 1 . 11/4/2004
Loved the first stanza..."mine true for eternity," that line just caught my attention. I just loved your poem. Thanks for all of your wonderful reviews, I truly appreciate all of them. )
catseyeview chapter 1 . 11/2/2004
I tried to review this last night but FP didn't let me...I loved this poem. It is an affirmed direction that drives the basis of this and for me, I'll print this and post it on my wall! PS: had to laugh aloud at your comment on my erotica, yes, I suppose it is stile of sorts, it is even funnier because I know I have not even posted my most "erotic" pieces. Keep writing. crw
Ashes of a Willow chapter 1 . 11/2/2004
great ending! I liked how a word from each line was passed into the next one and so, the poem progressed. a neat idea! Keep up the good work