Reviews for Wonderful Dreams
Aslan Israel chapter 1 . 5/1/2005
end seemed to come very suddenly, but i guess, that's what most dreams do. Nice job.
youzi chapter 1 . 5/1/2005
This flowed well and the descriptions of 'paradise' was pleasant..One complain is the abruptness of the revalation that it was a dream..made it kind of comical.. Do keep writing (hope my frankness's ok with u)
Infinite Smiles chapter 1 . 12/15/2004
Aw;..the poem made me feel all happy, but then it was just a dream. Aw shucks! Great poem.
kirjava d chapter 1 . 11/22/2004
So poetic, so strong...I loved the symbolisim.
Happy-Platipus chapter 1 . 11/22/2004
You wrote something new, yay!Its rewally cool. I like it. Its very youee.