Reviews for Omniverse
vague shadow chapter 9 . 1/13/2005
Wow...these are quite wonderful! I love them all. _ I do have my favorite, however. And here they are...ahem...

VenusMarsSaturn and, Pluto

Great job! And so sorry, it has taken me so long to review one of your haikus like you asked...

**prostrates self before you in hopes of forgiveness**

CR
Manuel Fajar chapter 8 . 12/8/2004
Cerulean spin,

Jetstream ripping methane clouds,

Uranus's twin.

Great Dark Spot mysterious,

Shifting from the South to North.

—M—
Manuel Fajar chapter 7 . 12/8/2004
Aquarius's friend,

Spinning sideways—gas-giant,

Forty-two year Spring.

—M—
Manuel Fajar chapter 6 . 12/8/2004
Moons or rings—¿Which One?

Crowned in fields translucent cold,

Tilting in the sky.

—M—
Manuel Fajar chapter 5 . 12/8/2004
Ancient Titan's son,

Swelled beyond normality,

Swallowing what's near.

—M—
Manuel Fajar chapter 4 . 12/8/2004
Rocky Horror Show,

Vampire warrior black laced,

Draining with a bite.

—M—
Manuel Fajar chapter 3 . 12/8/2004
She can't seem to find,

Anyone that will love Her,

Poisons all Lovers.

—M—
Manuel Fajar chapter 2 . 12/8/2004
Flitting messenger,

Fluid, silvery and quick,

Melting near the sun.

—M—
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 12/8/2004
Average yellow,

From a sister sprung our life,

Daily happiness.

—M—
cosmo-queen chapter 9 . 12/8/2004
These haikus were gorgeous. The images you painted of each planet were unique, and I especially liked the Sun and Mercury. Great work! And thanks for the reviews :)

*cosmo-queen*
Kalopsia chapter 9 . 12/7/2004
nice poems. straightforward. tho u have mercury and venus mixed up-venus is the hottest planet and is red. also, what about planet Quaoar?
Pimpled Boy chapter 9 . 12/1/2004
This is an excellent anthology of haikus! I like the last haiku about Pluto. I also like the title that you give to this anthology. Thanks for reviewing my work. By the way, what I've typed in that "story" is not kanji, but hiragana. Nice to learn that you know Japanese. Sayonara!
Faithless Juliet chapter 5 . 11/2/2004
I love this one to, and Jupiter is my favorite planet, no one really evers pays attention of Jupiter so I'm glad that you wrote about it. Keep up the good work. I look forward to reading more.
Much love,
Juliet.
Faithless Juliet chapter 4 . 11/2/2004
This is my favorite so far.
Juliet.
Faithless Juliet chapter 3 . 11/2/2004
I love how you give Blue, a feeling, that can be difficult in writing, to give colors feeling, but you truly created a mood with this one.
Juliet.
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