Reviews for Cave In
One-Hand Clap chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
Okie doke, only one thing about this poem that kinda ruined it! The spelling error - unless it's a pun I'm just not understanding. But, ech, I'm one of those terrible sticklers for spelling mistakes. The last line is 'loose', where it should be 'lose'. Otherwise, this poem is great, for its simplicity. The Haiku format you have selected is superb.
in theory chapter 1 . 1/3/2006
Maybe so. Interesting little tiny thought, I like it lots. I'm waiting for new stuff Joolyet! hehe. Keep up the great work, shalom.
White is a Sin chapter 1 . 12/15/2005
how come there is only 2 lines?

it's good except for that
Amarise chapter 1 . 1/19/2005
hmm. i like this one too. You're a great writer, keep at it.
Radyn chapter 1 . 12/7/2004
I thought it was supposed to be Freedom.
Kasatriya chapter 1 . 11/10/2004
Oh! I love! I am a huge believer of fate...
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 11/2/2004
wow.. very interesting... I like it... your short poems are awesome
elvenstorm chapter 1 . 11/2/2004
He he how true! Very good :)
CaramelCream chapter 1 . 11/2/2004
Thats an interesting way to define fate. I see fate as more of a security blanket to those who dont want to loose it all and those who want to gain. You have an interesting POV.
Good work.