Reviews for Fly
Kasatriya chapter 1 . 11/10/2004
Aww! This is soo beautiful! I love it!
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 11/7/2004
aw very sweet.. I like it a lot
Rionarayne chapter 1 . 11/4/2004
Excellent poetry! You have a gift for great imagery. I liked the disconnected feel of the lines; it made me slow down to read it, which is always good when one is trying to hang on every word.
Rionarayne
RavenEffect chapter 1 . 11/4/2004
Brilliant, just a really brilliant poem!
Trajo chapter 1 . 11/3/2004
Sounds kinda scary to me. I don't know why. But it's a good piece of poetry.
lioness2004 chapter 1 . 11/2/2004
Wow! I love it! It creates an image of harmony in only seconds of time! Keep writing and I'll keep reading!