Reviews for Falls
hiding behind amber eyes chapter 1 . 11/11/2004
wow. were did you come up with this? i like this a lot. i think you took a fairy tale and gave it a drop of reality. lol i really so like it. love your metaphors and details :)
do not resuscitate chapter 1 . 11/9/2004
the fragmented format really worked for this poem. i loved the last four lines, they were just breath-takingly beautiful.
EvilNeko13 chapter 1 . 11/2/2004
Very nice. I liked it.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 11/2/2004
wow... that's beautifully written.. amazing job