|Reviews for A Tender Epiphany|
| ossining chapter 1 . 1/18/2005
Ooh, I don't usually read a lot of haikus, but this one I really like. Yes, very angsty.
| a muse's inspiration chapter 1 . 12/6/2004
Aw I love haiku!Brilliant :)
| Moon-Chaser chapter 1 . 11/30/2004
I like how you kept up your first attempt. It shows how is grew and changed. I liked the second one better, the lack of words can add much meaning.
Keep it up.
| Nanners chapter 1 . 11/5/2004
I love Haiku. This is a really good one. )
| scudcrow chapter 1 . 11/3/2004
Thanks a bunch for the help everyone, I've made the changes!
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 11/3/2004
Great tone and topic. To format into haiku would look something like—
My lie reflects hers (or, Lies reflecting lies)
One door leads to another,—
Tourist I remain.
Haiku—17 syllables (5-7-5) or you could expand to a tanka—31 syllables (5-7-5-7-7)
| That One Weird Guy chapter 1 . 11/2/2004
wow..I mean whew...thats just...short and great..
| Ashes of a Willow chapter 1 . 11/2/2004
yeah! your first haiku! I liked it. one thing though, a haiku has 5-7-5 syllable count. You were a little off, but still, you captured a moment and a feeling, which is great! Keep up the great work