Reviews for Downward Spiral Rising
Spelllesswonder29 chapter 11 . 12/23/2004
I love love love love love love it! I cannot wait for the next chapter!
city-gal7 chapter 11 . 12/23/2004
u updatd! yay! was really cool chappie...i still think that Chloe had won the fod fight but whatever ;) they like each other? i mean..conner and Chloe? they have a really long history and everything...but anyway,...MERRY CHRISTMAS and HAPPY NEW YEAR! also update
limelight chapter 11 . 12/23/2004
I like how you're adding a little more depth to the characters! I love the humor and the whole flashback scene was really sweet. It was a great chapter! Keep up the good work, and Merry Christmas!
Crazy Wynona chapter 11 . 12/23/2004
Awesome chapter. You are truly a hilarious writer. Question: are you going with the flow as you're writing this, or have you actually had a planout for this story? (well, besides the pairing) See you next chapter and congrats on a great chapter!
Dead Red chapter 10 . 12/21/2004
OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! You CAN'T stop there! SO cute! When do they kiss? COME ON! It HAS to be next chapter. God, Conner is SO hot! I find Chloe a little irritating, but she's kinda cute you don't update tomorrow, I'll have to start writing you hatemail! Jokes!

Lotsa loveScarlett
BrandonBoydHuggedMe chapter 10 . 12/21/2004
I wish I hadn't found this story so soon, because now I am waiting for a new chapter and it just eats away at me! You are a very talented writer; this story is awesome!
roman chapter 1 . 12/20/2004
oh Jiro... when will u BLESS us with another update?

*bows down, does kow-tow to pay homage to the Great Jiro*
city-gal7 chapter 10 . 12/17/2004
i love the food fight! it was so funny! and other parts were funny too! I love this story! for once i wouldn't actually mind if Connor and Chloe would end up togetehr...even though its kinda incest...but i really don't care for that in this story! its so good and original..keep updating okay?
fei-chan chapter 10 . 12/15/2004
Aww! I love Kyle! I love your story! You're very talented. Update soon!
InLoVeAnDwAr chapter 10 . 12/15/2004
OMG! I read that part about gluing his arse to the bench in kindergarten... and i TOTALLY lost it! I regained my composure, only to get the image of him sitting there and started laughing again... whihc my composure was once again short lived when i was reading the play-doh line and imagined a 17/18 year old seriously pissed about play-doh mishaps and not being able to have play-time... by far the most hilarious thing i've heard in my life... I'm still giggling

I love the food fight! I think I enjoy it more than i would, if it wasnt fact that me and my friend joe hadn't gotten into one the other day (one which i ended up concuring with honey in the hair and down the shorts... and i'm not talkin about in back ;)) ANYHOW, I thought that was brilliant... as was the entire chapter... hehe

Keep goin :D

Luv Kimmy
Sunflowers956 chapter 10 . 12/15/2004
CynicInLove chapter 10 . 12/13/2004
o...m...GASP...haha! food fights are awesome. i've never been in one though..just water fights. and although they are less sticky they are pretty fun. lol. well, it seems chloe is a bit of a klutz/pranker/spaz. lol.i think they'll get along just fine. LMAO! still cant stop laughing. please update sooN!
BoredomKills0620 chapter 10 . 12/12/2004
*Pumps fist in air*FOOD FIGHT! chapter..Lots of funfunfun!Whoohoo!I was gonna update sooner but lots of stuff has happened(i.e.,my friend's little brother[15 years old]died...was hit by a drunk driver while walking down a street;.;)but I'm here now..I feel bad that I don't have much to say but I'll say more next update..See ya soon(please?).

God Bless,Chelsea aka Sophomore .
FamousOneLiners chapter 10 . 12/11/2004
A gabillion more cookies will be sent your way
Laura chapter 10 . 12/11/2004
OMG! you have honestly got to be one of the best writers that ive come across! I Love chloe, shes so funny, and...sadistic, i think is the word im looking for. But im not sure who i want chloe to end up with, Warren or Connor. it'd be good if there was a punch-up between those two over chloe. heh. keep up the good work!
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