Reviews for Downward Spiral Rising
Dina R chapter 4 . 11/16/2004
aw, kyle is adorable. unlike mymlil sister whose a monster (ok, ok, i confess to liking her a LITTLE) lol. whats conners issue anyways?
Drac-frst chapter 4 . 11/16/2004
slow or not I loved this chapter. it added whole dimensions to the characters. Update soon please!
BoredomKills0620 chapter 4 . 11/16/2004
-w-w-w!That makes /me/ want a little was a great chapter!I loved it lots..You put a lot of funny little were greatXD!Some Conner too.I enjoyed that bit with him being calmed by his brother's sweet..I'm sure you'll update as soon as you can.~.Good luck on your paper & I'll see ya next time!
God Bless,
Chelsea aka Sophomore .
PS-I agree!Huzzah for procrastination!
BoredomKills0620 chapter 3 . 11/15/2004
Aw,man!No hanging out with Warren...?And bites a big to hang out with your mom's future girl...I know how she there,done .I really liked this chapter..Just the right amount of ya next update(hopefully soon.~).
God Bless,
Chelsea aka Sophomore .
Dina R chapter 3 . 11/15/2004
cool story. cloe sounds like me in the mornings, 'cept i hate coffee. lol. btw, just an idea (althou u prolly had the same one too)i think cloe n conner should end up together in the end. be a happy go lucky couple! hehe.
shadowedskies chapter 3 . 11/15/2004
LOL. Genius narration skills. Purely genius. To tell you the truth (i'm quite ashamed of this actually) i rarely (AKA never) read non slash stories lol but i LOVE this one. The characters are so well done and the story seems to be flowing smoothly. This kinda reminds me a bit of my highschool life minus a few insignificant details but all the same its great! Please continue this ASAP!
LilLaTLuv chapter 3 . 11/15/2004
No prob. Thanks for updating! This sounds great. Why is he so mean? Is it because he doesn't like her moving over to his place any more than she does? Update again soon! I love this story!
Luv ya,
Tashi :)
Shaylee chapter 3 . 11/15/2004
lol hahahahaha the diagram... thats so cute, well update soon
BoredomKills0620 chapter 2 . 11/8/2004
Cool story!Can't wait ill the next chapter..I like seems like a neat person!Plus glasses are smexy(so majorly sexy).~.Is it weird that,even though Warren has a gf & Chloe likes Ian,I'm still going for them?...It probably is but who knows?I may be rooting for Connor & Chloe next(even though they'll be step-siblings).I bet I'll change my mind a few times before I land on !Please update very soon!PLEASE!
God Bless,
Chelsea aka Sophomore .
LilLaTLuv chapter 2 . 11/8/2004
This story sounds great! I can't wait to see what happens! Update soon, and show me where this is going.
Luv ya,
Tashi :)
Shaylee chapter 2 . 11/7/2004
arrgh waking up in the morning... that sounds like me even the coffee and I love how you did the connections- thats cute how people find a way to connect others, update soon :)
Shaylee chapter 1 . 11/3/2004
This is really really good, I think it needs a bit of polishing here and there to make it flow more but its a FANTASTIC idea, can't wait for more
Rinfirithiel chapter 1 . 11/3/2004
wow this is great so far! keep it up! I'll be looking forward to the update
PhiloNysh chapter 1 . 11/3/2004
Good Intro, but...
I'm a bit confused as to whom Warren and Nicole (etc) are, so I suppose that need more work.
also it's "c'est la vie" not "se la vie".
Otherwise good opening.
Samtara chapter 1 . 11/3/2004
Continue please...*gives sad face* I love this. I wanna read more...I'm greedy.
Please with sugar on top?
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