Reviews for Downward Spiral Rising |
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![]() ![]() ![]() O wow this is good. Stupid fictionpress kept failing me though whilst I tried to view the next chapters . I look forward to the next chapters |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cheerio for Warren! Woohoo! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was about to be reeled in to the Connor's camp for Chloe, when I hanged on firmly to the Warren's camp! LOL! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I seem to be tilting to Warren's side at the moment, since the two of sound really good. But I've always been a fan of girl-ending-up-with-playboy-guy... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hm... I'm thinking that by the end of this story Chloe would end up with Conner, but Warren looks so good with her now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ian is weird. I had a hard time understanding the relationships with Caitlyn. I had to resort in using my hands and making weird movements with it. Get it now, but still a bit confused. *laughing good-naturedly* |
![]() ![]() ![]() This looks good which is the reason that I'll be hanging around in your profile for quite a while... hehehe... |
![]() ![]() ![]() no! |
![]() ![]() hey! I just read about why you havent updated it, so first of all I just want to thank you for the story, for sharing it it is amazing, and really hope you can finish it and update it soon, I know that it is difficult for you since it reminds you of some really bad things so if it is just too hard for you to keep writting I totally understand. Secondly, I really hope your mother is doing well, and send you my best wishes for a complete recovery, Ill pray for her and hope you are doing well. |
![]() ![]() PLEASEE update the story dying to read more!Hopefully you havent forgotten the story! it is amazing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Um, great story. BUT YOU HAVEN'T POSTED SINCE 2006! Ah! You need to post more. I really liked this story. Actually, I don't even know if you still even look at fictionpress, but if you do, I really, really want you to write and post more. I mean, if it's not too much trouble. |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome. i love it! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! Amazing story! I really really want to know what happens next! Please keep writing the story, or else I'll be VERY unhappy! :D Keep up the terrific work! Aryelle |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesomeness! i luv it..did u hav 2 kill off warren? he was so sweet and all...bah...so do conner and chloe hook up? NO too stepbro-stepsis thing! mebbe RYAN hes cute...not ian, hes too blah over sweet. i liked the title of ur story confusing. ur portrayal of the characters was good. but uh as u mentioned nikki is supposed to be obsessed with warren, but it doesnt really show. mebbe if u rewrite this u could do something to it. and one thing, u sed that she doesnt have any more friends...what happned to ian? uh and u hav a lil grammar prob...can u do sumting abt it? other than that ur writing is awesome! kayy, keep it real! write more! from a crazy fan the lil deVil |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow! this is an amzing story! are you ever going to update this again? because this is really good! and i love the fact that she's sort of attracted to 3 guys at the same time. more realistic that way. good job with your writing! |