Reviews for Downward Spiral Rising
Demeterr chapter 19 . 6/7/2009
O wow this is good. Stupid fictionpress kept failing me though whilst I tried to view the next chapters . I look forward to the next chapters
bubublacz chapter 18 . 6/6/2009
Cheerio for Warren! Woohoo!
bubublacz chapter 12 . 6/6/2009
I was about to be reeled in to the Connor's camp for Chloe, when I hanged on firmly to the Warren's camp! LOL!
bubublacz chapter 8 . 6/5/2009
I seem to be tilting to Warren's side at the moment, since the two of sound really good. But I've always been a fan of girl-ending-up-with-playboy-guy...
bubublacz chapter 5 . 6/5/2009
Hm... I'm thinking that by the end of this story Chloe would end up with Conner, but Warren looks so good with her now.
bubublacz chapter 2 . 6/5/2009
Ian is weird. I had a hard time understanding the relationships with Caitlyn. I had to resort in using my hands and making weird movements with it. Get it now, but still a bit confused. *laughing good-naturedly*
bubublacz chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
This looks good which is the reason that I'll be hanging around in your profile for quite a while... hehehe...
funnybizness chapter 18 . 6/4/2009
marianne chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
hey! I just read about why you havent updated it, so first of all I just want to thank you for the story, for sharing it it is amazing, and really hope you can finish it and update it soon, I know that it is difficult for you since it reminds you of some really bad things so if it is just too hard for you to keep writting I totally understand.

Secondly, I really hope your mother is doing well, and send you my best wishes for a complete recovery, Ill pray for her and hope you are doing well.
marianne chapter 19 . 5/16/2009
PLEASEE update the story dying to read more!Hopefully you havent forgotten the story! it is amazing!
Sakiru Yume chapter 19 . 5/16/2009
Um, great story. BUT YOU HAVEN'T POSTED SINCE 2006! Ah!

You need to post more. I really liked this story. Actually, I don't even know if you still even look at fictionpress, but if you do, I really, really want you to write and post more. I mean, if it's not too much trouble.
stop-drop-and write chapter 19 . 5/12/2009
awesome. i love it! :)
starlight-angel88 chapter 19 . 5/2/2009
Wow! Amazing story! I really really want to know what happens next! Please keep writing the story, or else I'll be VERY unhappy! :D

Keep up the terrific work!

lildevil123 chapter 19 . 4/24/2009
awesomeness! i luv it..did u hav 2 kill off warren? he was so sweet and do conner and chloe hook up? NO too stepbro-stepsis thing! mebbe RYAN hes cute...not ian, hes too blah over sweet. i liked the title of ur story confusing.

ur portrayal of the characters was good. but uh as u mentioned nikki is supposed to be obsessed with warren, but it doesnt really show. mebbe if u rewrite this u could do something to it. and one thing, u sed that she doesnt have any more friends...what happned to ian?

uh and u hav a lil grammar prob...can u do sumting abt it? other than that ur writing is awesome!

kayy, keep it real! write more!

from a crazy fan

the lil deVil
Veronica Kimble chapter 19 . 4/14/2009
wow! this is an amzing story! are you ever going to update this again? because this is really good! and i love the fact that she's sort of attracted to 3 guys at the same time. more realistic that way. good job with your writing!
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