Reviews for Downward Spiral Rising
no one chapter 19 . 8/14/2007
Why didnt u finish this god damn story?:
dearestmelody chapter 19 . 8/11/2007
This was really good. Seriously, I am not even kidding. I have been sitting at my desk, my eyes glued to the computer screen for the last...4 hours, reading this story.

Even though it has not been beta'd or stuff like that, the story was detailed and had twists and turns in almost every chapter. Though it had some spelling errors and stuff, it's not nearly as bad as most of the stories out there.

All in all, I think you did an excellent job and I'm really looking forward to see who Chloe end up with. Though I'm kind of leaning toward -
Katieee chapter 19 . 8/9/2007
Yeahh, I'm back. I was trying to sleep one night and I was reviewing your story in my head and I thought Connor's like one of those Chinese finger traps. You stick your fingers into them, and at first everything's fine, but you try to pull your fingers out. But they won't budge. They get stuck and soon they pressure's starting to get to your fingers and you stop. And then you could always cut it in half but it wouldn't be right so you go around with it and then suddenly unexpectedly one of your fingers come loose and then your free of the trap. But, it was so much fun with it, you have to play with it again. And so the cycle continues.

Ahah, yeah. I don't know where I got that from, but I really like Connor. . .and Chloe. . . together.

And I really like this story; it's amazing/
meismem chapter 19 . 8/8/2007
I just thought it might be a good idea to add the note in your profile to the end of the last chapter so that people who simply link directly to your story and don't bother checking profiles (like me sometimes) won't put their foot in their mouths.

I know from personal experience how hard that situation is. I had to stop writing a story altogether when a date rape I had centered it around happened to my sister in almost the exact same circumstances. There was no way I could finish without thinking of her.

So no pressure to update. Focus on your mom. I hope she recovers soon. Good luck.
Katieee katieee signed in chapter 19 . 8/6/2007
Its me again. I've just reread your story for the second time in a week. It is so good. : )

I'm really sorry for your mother, && I hope she gets better.

I've just been browsing through the reviews since I have nothing better to do, and I have some thing to say.

I can see that towards the last chapter Chloe's crush on Ian is slowly deteriorating because when he puts his arm around her she 'doesn't feel as good as she thought she would or soemthing.' When Warren asked 'It's Barton, isn't it?" Chloe threw a fit and walked out, but when Connor asked, 'It's Davis isnt it?" Chloe just told him she didnt want to talk. I think that means she likes Connor subconciously.

I really like that persons take on Waren. He IS like Gollum because he's very protective of "his things" I.E. Chloe. As he was glaring at the people the first day and practically forced her to wear the coat on the first day. I really think he's like a slug, or whatever those things are that get attatched to things. Or like my dog, who seems to have to be with me every waking or sleeping moment like Warren has, well had, to be with Chloe.

I believe that Connor likes Chloe. I think that Warren seems to know that too that's why he's always glaring at him and tried to keep Chloe away from the house for so long that night with the ice cream. And also, when he sees Chloe when Ryan's over and they're talking about number 16 or whatever, he always seems to back out of the plans.

Connor is so sweet, I love him. I wish theere was a Connor in my town. But then I'd have to be like Chloe, which I am SO not.

Ian, is just kind of dense, like Chloe is. He doesn't realize that Chloe's liked him for three years and Chloe didn't realize Warren had liked her for two.

Warren has no reason to complain, Chloe's had to deal with Ian & Caitlyn making out and flirting while throughout the process of this story Chloe hasn't been romatically linekd to anyone besides Warren.

Dumbsh. . you know. This chapter really made me change my view on him. Warren is slim.

I really think that Connor should help get Chloe through this. And I'd really love to see them together.

throughout the few pages i glanced at through your reviews i saw that Connor's got quite a following, no wonder he's the most popular kid in school while, well Warrens not.

: )

I think that they should just not care about the law and have Chloe && Connor together.

Anyways, I've ran out of things to say and my back is aching. I hope you can update soon because I'm dying to see what Connor&Chloe do next!

: )
elukazina chapter 19 . 8/5/2007
OMG you have to continue this story! its so great and fun and come on! and uhm... i like Connor better :D
lots of love chapter 1 . 8/4/2007
hey i read ur profile and i'm really sorry for your mother unfortunate state. she will be mentioned in my prayers. my empathy goes to you and your family. take care.

PS. for those rude PM forget about them do what you want to babe! ignore them people can be really inconsiderate at times hate when people are like that. so take care baby i can't possibly imagine what ur goin through. best of luck in everythin. Take Care Love.
ConstantViligance chapter 1 . 8/2/2007





i know i sound like an insecure, mean, selfish jerk


and i'm sorry about your mother! i really am

i hope she's all right!


i know that it may hurt emotionally writing the rest of the story, since the plot revolves around Connor's mom's death, and i totally understand.

I just hope that you will update!

you have hundreds of readers out there, waiting for a new chapter!

heyyy chapter 12 . 8/2/2007



well not really

i'll murder you with words via reviews at






i think i got my point across!

well, i hope you're doing allright!
Sarah Allie chapter 19 . 7/31/2007
freakin' hilarious! and i hope your mom gets better..
MelGrl chapter 19 . 7/28/2007
Wow, it has drama and is humorous. I think Chloe has some feelings for both Warren and Connor. I wonder what will happen next, so please update soon!
Essie chapter 1 . 7/28/2007

I check out your story every month to see if you updated just because for some reason I really like your characters and your story has stuck in my memory without me having to reread even if you haven't updated for years. Yay! (I hate having to reread stories) But I just assume you have a life if there's nothing new. I hope you stuck a pin in the ego of snarky reviewers who believe in their own self importance. You shouldn't even have to explain where you are and what you're doing. I hope you get to spend more time with your mum though. All the best.
kekeizhere chapter 19 . 7/26/2007
Hi..umm, I just wanted to tell you that your an amazing writer and I can't wait until you update, and i hope your mom's okay.
sugarcane.delight chapter 19 . 7/18/2007
Lovely. Update soon!

And uh, I think she should be with Connor. Then create more complication. And Warren could be with... Claire? Or Ian -whistles.-
Keenon chapter 19 . 7/17/2007
OMG that was one of the best stories i have ever read! more soon!
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