Great story - update would be fantastic but not expecting one at all.

I'm so sorry about your mum.

I really hope she'll come out of it okay.

Awesome writing.

xx

lol sorry, i left my comment for this chapter on the last chapters comments. :]

Hey,

i just read this whole story and i just wanted to let you know how good it is. I really enjoyed it and couldn't stop reading :]. Anyway I hope you have some time and/or inspriation to update this story because i'd really like to know what happens lol.

Katy

I think that a really good story is worth waiting for, and that's what I'm willing to do for this one because it is more than worthy.

As an author, and particularly as one that is writing for no personal gain other than the achievement of writing a good piece of fiction, you deserve every bit of respect that the readers can muster up. I'm just sorry that you haven't been receiving that lately.

I hope everything goes well for you, and I sincerely hope that some idiot readers can find the decency to shut up, like most of us want them to.

It's a great story. I hope you continue.

Noo I was completly expecting to click continue for chpater 19 asnd I find low and behold that you havent updated! I have read an unfinished book! -pouts-

well understandable cause.. you need time to write and all...

Just update! -insert big smiles-

update soon! you have a great story

are you ever going to update? love love love. conner please! no warren, he's soo.. ugh. beautiful story, i love kyle too. haha. please do update!

Don't mean to sound pushy but are you ever going to update this!

Please let Chloe end up with Warren. It would mean more to me than you can imagine. I can't even begin to count the ways that this story reflects (not resembles) my life.

Besides the fact that I have a "Warren" figure in my life whom I am totally head over heels for, the chemistry and development of your two characters leads common sense to not allow anything other than a pairing. Connor's great, but not Chloe's perfect second half; plus he's her "step-brother", and that would be painfully weird. Sure, ending up with Warren might be a bit cliche and unoriginal, but I think that you have gone above and beyond in proving that your story is far from ordinary. Good job! I will wait for this story forever.

Take as long as you need to update, and know that you, your mother and your family are in my prayers.

Your story is nice, supposedly. At least have the decency to tell us the reason why you don't update anymore.

woa cool story hope u continue it i cant wait to see warren and chloe together though u make it out like connies in love withher which is kinda weird considering theyre step borther and sis but its still cute

lol. hitler

I have to review, if just for the fact that in your story you included THE BEST fighting game ever made, namely Soul Calibur II.

Damn that's one good game.

And this is one good story.

A lot of writer's I've read have tried to write sarcastically, or with humour, but after a while the jokes get repetitive or stale.

Impressively, that hasn't happened with this story yet, and I actually chuckled out loud, which is a rarity for me so congrats.

Dortios are also the best crisps (chips) ever.

Gonan read more soon, love your writing style,

Angel Led Astray.

hey, lovin the story.

i want chloe to get with conie!

i try to be horrified by the fact that she'd be with her step brother but it just doesn't work for me - is it even illegal?

anyway, hope you come back to this story because it really is great and you should be proud of what you have done here.

keep up the good work luv!

So I read this story awhile back, but the last like 4 chapters or something are new to me. And I'm hoping that even though its been awhile since your last update that you will soon. I really want Chloe and Conner together, even if it is a little odd with them being step siblings or almost anyway. To me her and Warren just don't seem right for each other. And Conner sounds incredibly enjoyable. :) Anyway, I just reread this whole story instead of studying for my Accounting test that I have tomorrow (and its the HARDEST of the whole semester!) so I think you should do something nice for me and update. YAY! :)