|Reviews for life|
| reicheru chapter 1 . 1/8/2005
hahass dont worry larh! it was a very nice poem. so obviously you can do both genders.
great job yeah. keep it up. what does the latin line mean anyway?
| negligible fictional force chapter 1 . 11/27/2004
ARGH.I LOVE WHERE DO YOU GETYOUR WONDERFUL amazing.i loved it with all my heart.-kismet.
| Pimpled Boy chapter 1 . 11/6/2004
This is a wonderful poem. The words are well-selected and they convey the message with a great impact. Kudos! Please review my work too.
| do not resuscitate chapter 1 . 11/6/2004
beautiful descriptions. i loved the ending. well-written and meaningful. i love it.
| Aqua Illuminati chapter 1 . 11/2/2004
Wow. A really great poem! I think you're one of the best poets I've ever met. Anyway, on to the good points. I really love that part about "She has forgiven the past. The past has not forgiven her." That was a master touch! The comparison is well brought out. Not really sure what you meant by "Her name is not Havisham" though. Nevertheless, keep up the good work!
| Teacup Majoram chapter 1 . 11/2/2004
Wow. Really powerful. I loved it, definatly a fav.