Reviews for Jude
total-nirvana chapter 1 . 1/26/2005
Too fantastic. God, I love your writing. I'm now obsessed, I swear.
monotonedsoul chapter 1 . 12/22/2004
amazing
Mynix chapter 1 . 11/15/2004
fucken brillant..
asyousaid chapter 1 . 11/11/2004
You say a great deal in, what, five lines?
"Sanity/Of energy" is so evocative, and the last two lines are so dispassionate it makes me feel at home :-D
PetiteLumiere chapter 1 . 11/11/2004
Interesting, I'm not sure I totally get it.
I still like it though... _
Kati .
bluesinner chapter 1 . 11/11/2004
Is this a soliloquy, or is it being addressed to somebody?
Ego, shame and sanity they just cannot co-exist, which brings to crisis. Nicely done.
A poem to reply your poem:
Forgiveness
of innocent
and love
its a shame
I have to be a lovestruck Romeo.
Take care.
Kasatriya chapter 1 . 11/10/2004
This is good!
rocklegendlynx chapter 1 . 11/9/2004
short, simple and you get very nicely to the point as well as having an underlying meaning
Deluminated chapter 1 . 11/3/2004
Again...very short, but striking in its simplicity. Nice.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 11/3/2004
interestin.. whats with the title?