Reviews for The Monster Within
Citrine Sharp chapter 1 . 8/16/2005
Thanks, both of you. The gore of the poem is more of a tool to show how bad the subject can become. The poem is about depression, small or large it can cause alot of inner damage. The poem is just a verbal version of this. - I kind of like how it turned out myself, as gory as it may be, it gets the point through.
LAaALA chapter 1 . 11/4/2004
This is a great poem. A little morbid maybe but I liked it anyways.
lozfairy chapter 1 . 11/4/2004
This contains brilliant writing, rather gruesome imagery but it just makes the message more powerful. I like it.
~lozfairy x~