Reviews for You Took Away My Fate
Billios chapter 1 . 11/4/2004
better to have loved and lost than to have never loved at all? apparently not. the name "chained freedom" so accurately sums up the teenage angst that i so dearly love to take the piss out of, but your poem was actually pretty good. then again, i like anything that rhymes. good job, keep it up. and r&r my stuff if you have the time, i seem to be very unpopular on this website!
GothicSpook chapter 1 . 11/4/2004
This poem is so good! The rhyming was perfect, the puntuation (sp?) was great, givng it a great flow and it was so deep with wonderful imagry! Well done!
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 11/3/2004
This poem is FANTASTIC! So well written... I can relate to every sentence, every word, it's so amazing. It's like you've read my mind and made it a poem! Keep up the excellent work!
-Anna.