I can't believe that I haven't reviewed this one yet. I think this poem is my favorite one you've written. You have a way with words lovely. Every word contributes to the meaning of it. The last four lines especially. Please put more up here, I enjoy reviewing them.

wow great this is going on my fave list if you would thou do u think you could review one of my stories or some thing as my condefence in this matter is way down

I really like that poem. It's strong.
You did a really good job. :) Two thumbs up!