Reviews for On the Run Again
Teperehmi chapter 1 . 11/19/2004
Not a bad start! I'm interested in seeing what happens next.
Wosie chapter 1 . 11/15/2004
That was really good. Are you going to write any more? please do. it had just the right amount of text and speech. not too much of either.
aqua-angel chapter 1 . 11/6/2004
heyaz. kk, minor typos and could use some descriptions on characters and surroundings. Pretty good though, you definitely can feel teh tension between characters :) great job on that. I love the ending! anyways, keeps it up!
Artemis Darkclaw chapter 1 . 11/5/2004
I know this is very short but all of my western sotires are actually about one character. They are different points in his life, i just haven't decided how i'm going to connect them yet. Please read and review.