| Reviews for America's Sweetheart |
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   Selena Brudi chapter 6 . 7/12/2005 doesn't Eve like Jesse? mixed feelings about this chapter... it was pretty good, and Luke interrupted at a time when I thought Eve was going to actually go to Mike's with Jesse... I liked this chapter, but as I said before, kinda mixed feelings. please update soon, because, no matter what, I am bored and have nothing to do but read stories on FictionPress. Sad, ain't it? |
| jade-is-a-star chapter 5 . 7/12/2005 GAH. JUS READ THAT U WANNA PULL DA PLUG. DON'T U DARE DO TH . LOOKIE, I WROTE ANOTHA REVIEW. OK. JUST DUN DO NUTHIN NAUGHTY |
| twistedFAerieTALes chapter 6 . 7/12/2005 argh! you finally update and then you trash jesse! HOW COULD YOU! lol. jk. you ARE going to fix things eventually, AREN'T you? lol. update asap! review more later...gtg to work..~Sage |
| jade-is-a-star chapter 6 . 7/12/2005 Gawd Eve! How could she do that to Jesse? ok just like to say i like this version of the story better, cos its got lots of nice parts with Jesse. And you revealed Eve's not so good life, which was nice to know that she shared with Jesse. i was talkin 2 ma frnd who i recommended ur story 2 nd shes only read this version so she had no idea hoo Luke Garcia was, or otha ppl like Tamis sista nd how she left her home. man. oh. man. still cant get over the fact that Eve wouldn want Jesse sayin th . plz. update soon. jade-is-a-star: keepin it real |
| xWhit3StaRx chapter 5 . 7/11/2005 Update soon! -xWhit3StaRx |
| xWhit3StaRx chapter 4 . 7/11/2005 Good, good... ~xWhit3StaRx |
| xWhit3StaRx chapter 3 . 7/11/2005 (I'm just reviewing because of your hint in your bio P) ~xWhit3StaRx |
| xWhit3StaRx chapter 2 . 7/11/2005 Nice. ~xWhit3StaRx |
| xWhit3StaRx chapter 1 . 7/11/2005 Great chapter! ~xWhit3StaRx |
| xWhit3StaRx chapter 6 . 7/11/2005 Aw poor Jesse...haha Eve's hilarious though P Update soon! -xWhit3StaRx |
| kat6528 chapter 6 . 7/11/2005 aww too bad jess. can't wait for the next chapter! |
| Tor chapter 6 . 7/11/2005 Aww, boo at Eve for getting so testy. I would choose Jesse over Luke any day. But I still love the story. Please don't pull the plug. I was so excited when I saw it was updated. Though it took me a little while to figure out exactly what had happened. :-P Are there any big changes we should go back and re-read for? Update soon! |
| A.C.Killeaney chapter 6 . 7/11/2005 you changed the ending, damn you. i'm just kiding. but i must say i liked the other ending better. oh well. it's your story, and i'll still read it no matter what. just keep writing. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/11/2005 you really didnt have to put in the thing about jesse losing his virginity, that was really unnecessary. Believe me. |
| birdytamel chapter 6 . 7/11/2005 o-o-o-o-o-e-e-e talk about a blow-off. wow. i'd given up on this story. one request: i am totally lost as to what is going on in the story. if next time you could, perhaps, give a line or two about what on earth is going on? |