|Reviews for America's Sweetheart
| Lise chapter 21 . 6/5/2005
Yes! Eve is with Jesse!
| LcT514 chapter 22 . 6/1/2005
aww this is such a great story!~ is clay jealous or something?
| I-eat-Paste chapter 22 . 5/30/2005
No I will no allow you to pull the plug on this story. It's great. I come on line everyday just to see if you've updated! And if you want more reviews well then I'll review everyday until you update! Ok this makes me sound like a total loser but...I really like, no love this story. UPdate, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE,UPDATE ...
| Nerdette chapter 22 . 5/29/2005
I love it! I wonder who will get with her in the end...Will it really be Jesse?
| Chikki-Dee chapter 1 . 5/19/2005
Update. UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE
| Humor Me Pink chapter 1 . 5/9/2005
Update, now. *pouts*
| Syene chapter 22 . 5/8/2005
Is your mother all right? I hope she get's well soon. Btw, I think you've got a really interesting going on, and that you're one of the most conscientious writers I've come across, having written 22 stories in just 3 months.
| square root chapter 22 . 4/30/2005
This is going to be short because I happen to be tired- but since I started writing I noticed how nice it really is to get reviews- so I decided to review anyway. I want you to UPDATE! Yes, I realize that I have no right to tell you that since I just found your story, but I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! And I certainly wouldn't mind if you put more Luke in- am I the only one who likes him? Can I have him? Pleasepleaseplease? Okay, I'll stop scaring you and go away. But one more thing: PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
| Alison chapter 22 . 4/27/2005
It's really good I wonder what happens in the end,keep on going
| horsegurl770 chapter 22 . 4/21/2005
how does a dishwasher explode exactly? Did it like, burst on fire or something? That must have been scary. Anyways, I love your story, it is really funny! Jesse is soo sweet and nice and funny and realy realy hot! Eve is really funny, and I love your plot line, it is very interesting! I hope your mom is okay. Um, a few chapters ago you said the doctors think you have thyroid problems? Do you? Cause I do too, and they suck. It's called grave's disease or something, but anyways, i hope you don't have it. I really love your story, so please update soon!
| Eliwood of Pharae chapter 22 . 4/20/2005
wow, weird story. but fun. update soon. thank you for translating the itilian. oh well, good night
| Gwen Rhosyn chapter 22 . 4/8/2005
Your story is absolutely great ...And Eve is one hell of a character. I really wish she was a person in real life. Would love to meet I wish there are more girls like her in my surrounding than these on with your story...At some point I really thought Eve is going to get together with Clay. I like his character and I do understand his "split personality". But Eve and Clay - these two do not click like Jess/Jesse/Julian and the way, did you pick the name "Eve" on purpose? Because I think it is absolutely great. Come to think of Eve - the woman, the first woman on earth, representing all female characteristics etc. and your character Eve and what she stands for.
| lostinscotland chapter 22 . 4/4/2005
it is far too late for me to be awake... no. it's only 11. 5 is far too late for me to be awake. anyhow. i'm not quite conscious, for some reason. however, i do have to say that your story is beyond brilliant. seriously. i've seen it advertised in favorites lists for a long time, but never read it...such a shame. but, i love this. absolutely love it. eve is super-awesome. i'm violent, but she actually beats people up! wondrous. i likes her a lot. and jesse is the best. seriously. and i absolutely love that he can't just let a girl cry. so sweet! overall, he's great fun. clay- i think i'm still holding a grudge against him despite the fact that he's actually pretty cool now. though his code of honor plus his touchy feelyness is odd...but fun. luke can die for all i care. except that it's fun to have more guys for eve to kill. andy rocks. go west point! my friend went there. then he dropped out. but anyhow. poor leo! i like him too. tori is a riot and tima is fun. and now that i've given you a rundown of all your characters, even though i'm sure you already know all this about them, i'm going to go...do something. but you are eternally my hero for relieving my boredom for the last two hours, just so you know. anyhows. in case you haven't guessed, or i haven't told you, i'm not really coherent right now, so i'm off. update soon, mebbe?
| onyxtreewind chapter 22 . 4/3/2005
I found this story before bed and stayed up all night reading it... It's really good! And thank goodness, Eve, you're dating Jesse- leave Clay to his sister. _Ciao!
| NomadicWriter chapter 22 . 4/3/2005
Okay finally read it all and im relieved that she is with Jesse i was worried there that she would end up with clay and he's not my favorite character in the world lol. I can't wait to read more and i love it, please update soon! Hope your okay.-Kate xoxo