|Reviews for America's Sweetheart|
| black robin chapter 22 . 2/13/2005
Awesome chapter! Update soon!
| a fan chapter 22 . 2/13/2005
yay! an update! im glad that u were finally able to update...but i hope that ur ok and feeling better, ur mom too! i normally bug ppl to write more, faster, etc. but instead i give u...*huggles times ten* instead, i hope u can write asap, and feel ok!
| Pundit chapter 22 . 2/13/2005
You have such a great sense of humor, I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT! I was laughing my ass off... ESPECIALLY her little tangent on the word "Fart". LMAO! Not only did the etymology thing throw me into a fit of hysterics (who DOES that for fun?), but every time she casually referred to Clay as 'Pardate' afterwards sent me into a relapse... God, I have stomach pains. I am most definitely the lowest common denominator. Some people think farts are funny... I think they're freaking hysterical. Anyway... back to the story...Poor Leo. They really expect him to marry his COUSIN? Some cultures are a little to alien for me to look at objectively. Or maybe not alien enough, if you understand that (Italy isn't like Botswana, if you catch my drift)
Anyway, I'm so glad you aren't dead! Though, it seems I was a little too close to the truth for comfort. I'm very sorry about your mom. I know that's not worth a whole lot but my heart goes out to you. I officially will hold no hard feelings against you if life forces you to chuck this amazingly beautiful story in the dumpster. Prioritizing is a bitch, but we all have to do it... some just have harder choices than others (not that THIS would be a particularly hard choice... um... yeah). Anyway, fear not, for I promise to refrain from making any voodoo dolls in your likeness if this story goes permanently on the wayside (which is sad for me, since I usually vent my anger this way... though it's rare that I do it, since stories this amazing are so far and few between). Anyway, whether it be 6 days from now or 6 months, until further notice I am anxiously awaiting your next update! God be with you (sorry if you're not religious... whoa, how PC am I now? Yech.)
P.S. YAY I'm up there with your guy friend's girlfriend! HUZZAH!
| it's only castles burning chapter 22 . 2/13/2005
Am glad she is with Jesse. Clay is turning more and more annoying and evil as the story goes on. And I so do not like Luke. Update!
| fairy pwincess chapter 22 . 2/13/2005
aw! Jesse and Eve are the cutest couple ever! Im really happy that she ended up with Jesse instead of Clay. Clay seems too egotistical. Anywayz. Update soon plz. pwetty plz cos i love this story! TTFN x ~*fairy pwincess*~ x
| blueangel87 chapter 22 . 2/13/2005
wow...you ceratinly seem to have a busy life! i dont know how you find the time to write such good stories! keep up the great work!
| alicenextdoor chapter 22 . 2/13/2005
woho...i guess theres a liitle bit hope 4 clay n eve, right?right?right?*wavesclayflag*he rockzz...!great chapter
| city-gal7 chapter 22 . 2/13/2005
forgive you gor updating late, it happens to all authors here. But..its good that Eve is dating Jesse, he's so hot! and who's leo? did u mention him b4? i think i forgot him...unless you never mentioned him! update soon
| Choir girl chapter 22 . 2/13/2005
Oh cool! A new chapter!Man this has been a relatively awesome day. That was a really good chapter. I love how you progress things and how events happen etc. In short, how could this story get any better?anyway. You take care. -C.G.
| Cat chapter 22 . 2/12/2005
This is one of the funniest stories I have ever read. Honest to God, I usually don't laugh out loud to stories. But this one just makes me happy. Also, if Jesse were real, I'd be fucked. But yea. Awesome story, very well written. God, even your replies to comments make me happy. lol. I think we'll just leave it at YOU make me happy, and you'll probably think I'm insanely creepy now. Oh well.
| bulletproof.cupid chapter 22 . 2/12/2005
YAY! I'm so happy for Jesse and Eve ) I wanted Clay's reaction to be more... beserk but yeah this was good too, very unpredictable. I thought he would hunt down Jess 'cause he would be jealous. Ah this works too. I have no idea what's going to happen to Leo... if I were him I'd run away lol! Imagine, your own mom bringing someone home for you to marry... and your home's supposed to be your safe-place kinda thing. Hmm I don't know whether to believe or laugh at your excuses. They were funny though _~ Anyways, update more... I'm always looking for another chapter. Adios!
| crazily-misguided chapter 22 . 2/12/2005
ooh la la! that was definately something i hadn't seen coming. well update cos this story r-o-c-k-s!
| rock 'n' roll junkie chapter 22 . 2/12/2005
lol, Clay is holding back. Really, inside he's jealous as all hell, and is pissed and probably going to have a "nice" talk with Jesse, which really won't be nice at all... haha. Anyways, love it. And I really hope Clay gets Eve, Jesse's cool, but Clay is just rocking. Keep up the great work!
| pixy-dizzy chapter 22 . 2/12/2005
*glomps* Totally understandable about the late chapter...and I would go all mushy and waily on you, but uh...yeah. You probably wouldn't appreciate that, lol!
Anyway. Great chapter. Aha! Eve is only going out with Jesse to make Clay jealous! THERE IS YET HOPE FOR THE EVE/CLAY PAIRING! ...Or maybe it's just my wishful thinking...T.T Hilarious chapter. Please update soon!
| Chookstar chapter 22 . 2/12/2005
Hey your back! Great chapter, long chapter! Update soon - more Jesse!1