|Reviews for America's Sweetheart|
| youspinme99 chapter 22 . 2/12/2005
another excellant chapter...i loved the reactions when she told luke and clay that she was dating jesse. but there was no jesse*pouts*please continue and update!
| babixbunny chapter 22 . 2/12/2005
i just love this story so much
| rsgone chapter 22 . 2/12/2005
lol. Poor Leo. The whole 'who dates Eve?' argument was amusing. Update fast, please.
| Jacky chapter 22 . 2/12/2005
HEY! You finaly updated! I really like this chapter but can't wait for the next one! )
And don't worry, I'm buying all your excuses. Writing would be the last thing on my mind if all that was going on in my life. Hope everything works out alright and you give us another chapter soon! Oh, and just in case you were curious, my teacher generously supplied me with the wrong answers during my religion exam which he marked right away so reading America's Sweetheart over studying was a good choice to make if I say so myself.
| Rose Richonne chapter 22 . 2/12/2005
Well, I loved that chapter, it was very long with lots and lots of things to think about. :) I have to say I was secretly hoping that there might be some table throwing Tarzan like reactions to her telling Clay about Jesse. But that's okay, lol, I like it when things are unpredictable :) Thank you for continuing to write this through everything, it's very sweet of you.
| Kalake chapter 22 . 2/12/2005
So your excuses are basically describing a technique to keeping readers in suspense in the structure of a cataclysm. Oh, bravo my friend, because you've been successful in doing so. But for future reference, let's keep the excuses to, let's say, a less authentic level.
Oh wait a second.. I believed every word of your excuse. Woops!
Great chapter, Oh Mighty One. And hope your mother, you, and the rest of your catastrophic family can have a moment of peace! Haha see you later.
| double-life chapter 22 . 2/12/2005
YES! YOU ARE BACK! Oh my god! I thought that that was how you were finishing your story. Wow I was realy upset. This chapter rocks! Keep writing. But don't wait that long.
| kat6528 chapter 22 . 2/12/2005
luv it! can't wait for the next chapter!
| LilLaTLuv chapter 22 . 2/12/2005
You FINALLY updated. Great chappie! I love how you did it. But this isn't finished yet, is it? I just wish she ended up with Jesse and that was the end. Happily ever after and all that. I know. Very unrealistic. But life is realistic enough. I don't need another jump-start to reality. UPDATE SOON!
Luv ya,Tashi :)
| NoFlyingPigsHere chapter 22 . 2/12/2005
howdy. i finally caught up...cant wait for more!
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| NoFlyingPigsHere chapter 20 . 2/12/2005
i so like jesse better than clay. i'm so glad they kissed. whoo-hoo!
| Humor Me Pink chapter 22 . 2/12/2005
I love you. I really, really love you. Your story is so awesome, I shall hug you. Ok... so, i dont, and i wont, but you get the picture. Your story is off the chain, and i love the character's attitude. THANK FUCKING GOD HER AND JESS ARE DATING. I dont like mr. big-n-rich. BO. Im totally into tori, and this whole 'marriage' thing... very, very scandalous. Um, and so you know... you made a few mistakes in your Italian. I dont know if you are fluent or if you hit a translator... but, you had a few screw ups. It was still understandable, but in every sentence something was wrong. If you need any pointers for future language scenes... I'm all powerful. heh. not really. just fluent in french, italian and german. Anyway, I love the plot... keep the good stuff a' comin'
| raniaur chapter 22 . 2/12/2005
WICKED chapter. A DIS to Clay, who does h\HE think he is, to decide who she dates, huh. Yessh. UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!
| messy chapter 22 . 2/12/2005
wohoo! another great chapter. update soon!