Reviews for America's Sweetheart |
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![]() ![]() Oh wow, I love this story! Lol... Btw, you keep switching the name of the punchbag from "Winston" to "Winnie." Dunno if you meant to do that, but... Oh well. Upadate, asap! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like it! jesse bonds reminds me of james bond...gotta keep reading... |
![]() ![]() SORRY TO SEND THIS BUT YOU REALLY NEED TO UPDATE |
![]() ![]() ![]() Are you dead? Please tell me you're not dead. *sobs* I don't know what I'll do if you're dead. *sniffles* Probably sulk and cry for ages. UPDATE, damn you! Please? |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's really really good XD You better update soon or else! |
![]() ![]() Hey ho!I really really really like this story..its so cute! maybe im the only one and a little weird but i cant understand why everybody loves evexjess so much. dont get me wrong he is hot and sweet but in my opinion i enjoyed reading the moments between her and clay more and i think they would be a perfect couple. maybe hes not so sweet and nice but it would be soo great if he would see that she is the one hes really in love with!owhh...*melt*look forward 2 the next chapter and sry 4 the bad language! |
![]() ![]() ![]() (taps foot)...yeah, yeah yeah, I've been silently reading...that's my downfall...now, I really really like this story...keeps on getting interesting...so...please post soon. AJ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm going to scream...AH! Okay I feel better! *Squeals* That was the best chapter ever! I love you :) lol. Please update soon, I'm completely and totally hooked on this story, I can't stand the wait much longer! Thank you for writing such a great book. |
![]() ![]() OH MY GOSH. dude, this is amazing. Sazzy sent me this link and I knew a few other people from MCBC were reading it and liked it but I just saved it under favs and kinda of neglected it. Until soemthing came over me today, probably boredom, that led me to read this. (I was studying for a relgion exam, I'm sure you understand.) And I have spend the majority of today reading the whole thing. It's not that I'm a slow reader, its just that I had to keep copying and pasting into Word and closing the box and opening it again to make my family think I was actually studying. And I had to give up the computer a few times but anyways-I'm done it now and I absolutely lurve it! You HAVE to write more and SOON. Very soon. The swearing is a little excess but I'm overlooking it just because the storyline is so great. Everytime I read the word "God" which is pretty overused actually, it reminded of me of my exam. ) But really, this is awesome! I can't believe you were going to leave it as a one-shot before. Thank God you got tons of reviews! I'm starving right now because I've forced myself to sit downn on the comp for hours just to finish reading this so I'm going to go eat now but I WILL keep coming back so update quickly! -Jacky P.S. If I fail my religion exam tomorrow morning, it's entirely your fault. Thanks for saving me from the boredom though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a great story! Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() argh! whats the holdup? r my reviews not good enough for u? huh? huh? *sigh* see what u not updating does to me? im going completely nutty...and even if its an exaggeration, i hope u feel the pressure. jk. but know that out there, there is someone like me-and make sure ur relaxed enough to do some serious typing! i hope this encourages u to write more, or at least smile. checkn' u out later! |
![]() ![]() love your story so much! theyre so cute! oh my god! (dont think im a ditz.. coz m not i just really really like your story) please update soon! i like jesse/eve! theyre THE BEST! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love this story soo much. i just started and just finished it today. it was so good. i saw when you last updated..1/2/05.. when are u gonna update next? |
![]() ![]() WHere have you gone? Exams? Anyways it's still a good story! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! I like this very much... lol but I'm sure you've heard that before. Isn't it great that Jesse and Eve are together *nudge nudge* lol yeah, I like that couple. Wonder how her life's going to turn out now? Definitely going to be interesting... for sure! Anyways, I really do hope her mom gets better soon oh and also Jesse's sister _ Update soon, I would love to read more. L8er... |