| Reviews for America's Sweetheart |
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   Night-Rayne chapter 6 . 8/31/2008 This story is really cool and just getting exciting! Though, I think Eve overreacted in this last one...anyways I really can't wait for the next chapter! |
| Zora chapter 6 . 8/16/2008 You are the meanest person on this site. How DARE you not finish this and leave us hanging? I've been laughing hysterically since i started it, but I'm about to cry seeing how you have updated it in 2005. Please please if you have any compasion for my poor depressed self, finish the story. I'll send you a bouquet of sunflowers! Thank you, ! |
| joseph'sgorgor chapter 6 . 8/1/2008 hey! i love this story! and jesse bonds! i really like your characterisation(: just out of curousity, why don't you like the name yvonne? |
| emilybh chapter 5 . 7/24/2008 LOL love it! |
| Fayre Meira chapter 6 . 7/8/2008 omg lady how cruel are you to leave this wonderful story hanging like this? you have such a way with words - i love the dialogues and how you convey the character's thoughts. but please continue this gem of a story! |
| IdeasInTheAir chapter 6 . 7/4/2008 Ouch...that must have hurt Jesse! Great story, at first I thought it would be one giant cliché, you know, normal but charasmatic and pretty girl suddenly has the attention of the guy everyone wants but her. But this is kind of different, and I really like it. Well done! Smiles, Danielle) |
| It's Not What It Looks Like chapter 6 . 6/8/2008 poor jess are you ever going to update this? cause its pretty amazing |
| Lyrical.Love chapter 6 . 4/20/2008 oh my you should update this story cause it is just a joy to read so yeah if you have time it'd be pretty cool if you could update ] |
| BluePillow chapter 2 . 3/20/2008 OMG how hillarius! I just laughed my ass of at this: Jesse Bonds is... blushing? Oh, no. No. Please, God, just this once, NO! Haha! so funny |
| I Murder on Impulse chapter 6 . 3/17/2008 Please write more? |
| noodless chapter 6 . 3/7/2008 just found this story - its really good! update soon please! |
| funky-gg chapter 6 . 2/24/2008 WOW i love it! u hav 2 finish it n she shud end up with jesse! |
| Efreisone chapter 6 . 1/27/2008 WHAT. NO. No, Jesse, no! Seriously, it's been like, what, two years since your last update? How can you leave this hanging here? I'm dying. Dying, I tell you. |
| Efreisone chapter 5 . 1/26/2008 Total 'daww...' moment right there... Jesse is so sweet. This is by far my favorite story on fictionpress! You must update more often! |
| flights.of.fantasy chapter 6 . 12/25/2007 beautiful story with a realistic and funny heroine. i love her, at least she's well rounded and she's.. real? i dont know what words i can possibly use to describe her. hope this story isnt dead, its really interesting, do update soon? lovee. |