Reviews for America's Sweetheart
stranger12 chapter 21 . 1/9/2005
Just so you know before you start reading this: I write a lot, and I'm half dying, 'cause it's two in the morning here where I am (Br), so forgive mistakes. Well, that and boredom I'm about to provide you, for , it took me quite a while to read every chapter of this story. More because I usually read two things at a time, which ain't good when ya're trying to finish one of them - or both, as it usually goes, of course -, but, even then... Just a week or so, reading a chapter of two, or more per day... , onto the story analysis (that's something I always do when reviewing, so, don't mind, and please, keep going):I found it quite interesting Eve's story and background. Though I didn't quite get it how she found herself being America's Sweetheart. Maybe I was half dead when I started reading the story, or maybe I just read to damn fast - which I often do -, but I just didn't get it. Oh, and how could she ever do so much in only two weeks (info from chapter 01)? Anyhow, interesting thing to put into her life. Not something people see everyday, I suppose. Not me, anyway. We, down here, don't care about shit. Well, at least people I know. Me included, for , the boys... Me? A sucker for 'em. I write too, and I usually put hundreds of guys after one girl, who usually doesn't want any of them, so that's what made me REALLY read your story, 'cause I could relate to you (personally, because of this little detail we happen to have in common). Anyway... Onto the boys. Jesse (curiosity: is Jesse really an accepted nickname for Julian? I'd like to know. I'm curious, now) is the bad boy (wannabe), cute and cutey. I love brothers, too. They always have this whole "must look after my siblings (usually younger ones)" thing going on, which's adorable. And he's adorable too! n_nAnd then, there's Clay (by the way, I like the names of the characters. Bonds, Clay... Hartford...) Asshole (not really in the making), rich, snob (kinda and really), arrogant, touchy-feely (I get annoyed by that too - personal space!)... But, with a heart. Just to ruin his act... But, to make 'im lovable. n_nAnd then... Luke. Luke Garcia... (good name too) An actor, hot (for your description), kinda weird, doesn't show up that much, but he's the reason a whole lotta shit happened in Eve's life. So he's important. And hot. , yes, yes, must say this: MY GOD! CAN YOU WRITE DROOLING-WORTH SCENES OR WHAT, GIRL? Damn! Jesse shower? GOD! Luke, for the first time appearing? Damn! Clay, being Clay, rich hottie? Goddamn, girl! Ya're good at it, so keep on writing sum' mo' of 'em, please! For girls - and some guys out there, I'm sure - to have something to drool over - even if it's only the PC ... I totally need to go to sleep. People're gonna start annoying me to. But I must say ya're quite the expert on guys. At least when describing them, and/or their actions. n_n And making 'em cute, adorable, lovable, ah...! n_nOh, yes, question. Their like sixteen, right? So... Sophomore year, Junior? Just to know. I'm a curious gal, you , and, sorry if you DO mind me saying, but what's Maureen's age? On one chapter, it's fifteen (I think, BAD, BAD memory), in one a little more ahead, it's like thirteen. And, depending on the majority's age, well... She should be like four years younger than Jesse, right? Sorry, again, if you don't like to be corrected. I know I don' , I've writing this for the last twenty minutes or so, and it's 2:25 now (or around it), so I REALLY must get to bed, now. Forgive the length (even though it's usual for me), mistakes along the way, and rambling, babling and shit like that. And non-sense. Confusing crap... It's me, it's you'll go on soon enough with your story soon, and adding a few more drooling-worth scenes,


PS: Reading a line or two of your reviews, here and there, I must say your humour is pretty wicked (and that's a compliment, coming from me)! n_n
lilmj007 chapter 21 . 1/9/2005
omg u gotta add more chapters more often! It distracts me from my social life Thank you! O by the way, the more jesse the better! I wish i had a hunk like him hanging around.
a fan chapter 21 . 1/7/2005
whats the hold up! keep crankin' out the updates! :P
rsgone chapter 21 . 1/6/2005
That was fun!Good job, very very good! Please update soon!
LilLaTLuv chapter 21 . 1/6/2005

YEAH! I'm so happy! My fav character! Is this the end? *shock* Tell me it isn't over yet! This is so great! UPDATE SOON!

Luv ya,Tashi :)
Emma chapter 21 . 1/6/2005
pure awesome.. cute scene there-throwing of the helmet, hair flying, felt like i was there.. cant wait to see what clay and lukr do when they find out about eve and it!
kat6528 chapter 21 . 1/5/2005
aww how cute. i luv it how eve kicks ass. can't wait for the next chapter!
black robin chapter 21 . 1/5/2005
Claire-a-bell chapter 21 . 1/5/2005
Alright, I'm officially in love with this story. You win my favorite person of the day award, congradulations! I can't wait to read more.
Claire-a-bell chapter 20 . 1/5/2005
Yay for this chapter! I was so pleased with it. I'm personally in love with Jesse, and if you don't want him please send him to me! Clay is alright, but I hope you don't have him end up with Eve, it just doesn't seem like they would mesh all that well. Plus, the Luke thing would be far to crazy to ever work out. Update soon!
JemG chapter 21 . 1/5/2005
Aw, cute. Fun chapters, since I've been isolated from the internet for a while, I just caught up. Lots of fun stuff happening, I'm glad she's with Jesse and I really hope you don't make any plans to change that. Anyway.
LilLaTLuv chapter 20 . 1/5/2005

GREAT JOB! I loved this! Absoluted loved it! I LOVE JESSE! He is my fav and so hot! I hope she ends up with him! But Clay isn't as bad as I thought, so... UPDATE SOON!

Luv ya,Tashi :)
grrrL chapter 21 . 1/5/2005
yay! i'm so happy! all these chapters so far are about jesse, and let me tell you, he is so hot! lol
gatepost chapter 21 . 1/4/2005
Update! Update! Update!Hmm, I think I like Bonds best, but things can't stay peaceful for !
till-the-end chapter 21 . 1/3/2005
I have got one word for you: WOW! This is an amazing story! You've got some skill! I am so flabbergasted( ilove that word!).I really think you should find a publisher or something and get this story in the stands! It would sell like no tomorow! You have to write more! I have been hooked on this story for two days and i can't get enough of it! I hope you get around to writting another chapter! I'm hooked! XoX till-the-end
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