|Reviews for America's Sweetheart|
| Noel Dreams chapter 21 . 1/2/2005
Wow! You're one hell of an updater! i love it!
| mj chapter 20 . 1/2/2005
WO HO! you updated! and it's absolutel glorious, by the way. your writing is incredible- keep up the great stuff!
| double-life chapter 21 . 1/2/2005
YAY YAY YAY! Is almost all I can say! This is so awesome! Jesse and EVe! Yay! That is so how I wanted it. They are so cute!
| nadljfaithglingh chapter 21 . 1/2/2005
Wow. If I ever...wow.
That was so CUTE! 0 I LOVE this story so much. (and it looks like everybody else on this whole freakin' site does too; you're KILLIN' on the reviews! *waves little 'reviews are my friend' flag* _~)
Anyway, thank you for your review (it made my day! 0) and keep up with the daily updates! Later! -Kera
| sunshower chapter 11 . 1/2/2005
Hello! I'm really enjoying this, it's like a breath of fresh air. Your characters are refreshingly unique and original and have their own personalities. Also you refrain from using three paragraphs to describe you main characters (Eve's) clothing and facial appearence. (e.g. She was wearing a bright pink tank top with a belly button piercing and manicured nails, her long golden blonde hair fell in smooth waves to the small of her back and her aqua marine eyes blah blah blah..)
Anyway, well done!
| ProxyWonker chapter 21 . 1/2/2005
. !OMG you actually DID a Jesse/Eve! I am so psyched! I never thought it would happen, considering Clay is your favorite and all. . .but then, Eve's probably going to get all confused and torn between the two of them, right? In keeping with the theme of the story? Or Am I completely wrong? I hope so.
I especially liked the "Ah, crap. Now I have to yank her helmet off and kiss her," making it sound like some big trial or something. Funny.
Oh, and thanks so much for reviewing Chasing Mussolini for me. muwahz
| Em Crosthwaite chapter 21 . 1/2/2005
Okay I haven't really reviewed any of the other chapters, because I've just wanted to keep reading. I love Eve and Jesse together, they are so cute. Jesse and eve have something in common, with both havibg relatives in the hospital. He really is a sweetie. I also thought that Clay and Eve would be cute together, but his intentions with her are fuzzy. Does he really like her? Or does he see her as property, and wants to get into her pants? I also really like Tima and Leo. It was great how you made them pretend to be together at the party. Anyway really cute story. It's on my favorites list now.
| Ashley Tucker chapter 20 . 1/2/2005
Yea! Great Chapter!
| Ashley Tucker chapter 21 . 1/2/2005
Hey! Great Chapter!So...you still think I'm gonna be really mad? heh. Can't wait to read
| remmyalamode chapter 21 . 1/2/2005
YIPIE! They is together! (well, sorta, theres always clay to get in the way…hinthintnudgehudge…) yupyup, im glad…they are so damn cute together!
| J FAN chapter 21 . 1/2/2005
YEAH! ALL RIGHT! JESSE AND EVE WOO HOO!haha how do you think Clay is going to react when he finds out? Oh well. Great chap, cant wait to read the next one.
| rock 'n' roll junkie chapter 21 . 1/2/2005
*blinks, stunned* ...So that's it? They get together...just like that? Wowzers. But...Clay, he's awesome, and Jess suddenly jumps out of nowhere and claims Eve? But Clay was with Eve most of the time (at least 5 chapters in a row). Well...okay, I guess Jesse and Eve feel they have the chemistry. And it is good in a way, because I get Clay AL to myself! *beams* Alright. Well overall, wasn't the best chapter, but, at least readers were satisfied. They like Jesse more, *mutters* Clay I love you. Update soon!
| tarnished chapter 21 . 1/2/2005
I.. what...I mean... HOLY SHIT!
Seriously, I started reading from chapter 19, right? And I sat casually back, reading leisurely like I always do. And then the kiss comes, and I swear to you I'm now 5 inches away from the screen (which isnt good, seeing as I'm kinda farsighted and all) and my hands are gripping the monitor like a lifeline.. there is just no other words to describe it. You are lovely.
And then the whole Cassidy catastrophe had me jumping up and down for joy, looking like a complete dumbass. Not... that its unusual or anything. While reading, I was sitting there like, oh god.. Eve's gonna see Cassidy hanging all over Jesse and cliche - shes gonna get pissed and run off. But I should've expected otherwise, from you and Eve ;) And then there comes another kiss and yay.. oh look at that, I'm floating now.
This story just gets more and more interesting.. I hope there is more Jesse lovin' in the near future. I cant wait for the next update :)
| jammi chapter 21 . 1/2/2005
YEAH! :D Thanks for updating so fast!
| Tzao chapter 17 . 1/2/2005
Hey, I just started reading last night. I love the story! Eve is my type of person, lol. :)Cheers.-t