|Reviews for America's Sweetheart|
| Sita chapter 20 . 1/2/2005
oh oh oh oh puhlease keep jesse and eve togetheri love clay too but i just think jesse and eve are made for each otherdont let clay get jess into troublepuhlease!
youve got talent girl, keep up the great work
and keep jess and eve together, theyre so gorgeous :P
| Empyrea chapter 20 . 1/2/2005
awesome story and update soon ).
| Chookstar chapter 20 . 1/1/2005
Oh i'm sorry! I have been fully slack with reviewing havn't i? I do love this story! And I love Jesse. I would never abandon my Jesse (or you...since you invented Jesse!). That was such a gorgeous chapter by the way. O my favourite line - like a bipolar toddler! Ha that was hilarious! You're such a legend with witty comments my friend. I've decided i've come up with a solution to all of us loving Jesse but you loving Clay...Clay and Tori should get together! Or...you could introduce a new character! Ok, so i have alterior motives for trying to hook Clay up with someone. It can't be helped - i have serious issues! And Damnit, i'm proud of it! I'm thinking that there should be more PDAs in the future - and your description of the teacher who caught my favourite couple? Fantastic! Thoroughly ammusing dude! Ok so i absolutly promise to review all future chapters - unless Clay messes with my aforementioned favourite couple, then in that case i apologise in advance for my abusive comments!
| shadowgirl618 chapter 20 . 1/1/2005
o i still like jesse better than.. uhh. whats his face. chipmunk? chad? uh... charter? hahahaha. oh god i forgot his name. CLAY! thats right. lol. *blinkblink* lol. totally lost it there. its like i WAS eve. lol.
GREAGREATGREATGREAT HAPPYHAPPY CHAPTER! very happy
| gothicbunnie chapter 20 . 1/1/2005
frankly I don't give a dang who you like, I'm in love with Jesse and would hate to see him go!
| Raging Libra chapter 20 . 1/1/2005
Woot! I so like Jesse better than Clay. (no offense) Great chapter!
| The Rejection chapter 2 . 1/1/2005
Try to warn me next time you change POV's; I was confused at first.
Awesome. Bad guy meets good girl.. .though his entire situation seems a bit... much. The suicide and prison thing I can take, but add the sister with cancer and it gets to be unbelievable, so at first I thought maybe he was lying. O_O Bad life, much?
| The Rejection chapter 1 . 1/1/2005
Oh, this is horrible... not the story, but the fact that her mom is dying. My mom has lupus too; she's not dying from it, but still... it makes me think that she could be, and it's sad thinksing that well. Don't think it's that your story is bad, but... it made me sorta depressed.
Anyway, I'll cheer up and keep reading despite that. After all, it's not like you meant to make me sad... ack. Sorry, I'm rambling.
| RomanceJunkie3 chapter 20 . 1/1/2005
that is soo sweet!stupid english teacher, i hate all english teachers! but wutever. please update cuz i want more on Jesse, damn he's ..~BJ52
| President Booty chapter 20 . 1/1/2005
First i got to say that i think it's funny that ur in love with Clay cauz i am so in love with Jesse, and i soo would've bet that she was going to end up with Jesse. Also i defiently think that Clay needs to be humbled and learn to work from friends to something more cauz Jesse obviously learned that. Plus... i just think that Jesse is wooing her and that Clay wants another grl to his i really like your story and the way you tell from more that one perspective. I espeically like the way you write as Eve she cynical and sarcastic and well, i really like your story... please continue writting theres nothing worse than an unfinished story
| fresianlady chapter 20 . 1/1/2005
O I WANT A JESSE!yes you did a perfect job. . .lets just hope the press peeps didnt see that. . .and how do you know hes a better kisser?have u been a naughty girl with the umm. . i dunno how u couldve been one. . .im kinda tired anyways. . .UPDATE SOON!
| laurelandlarkspur chapter 20 . 1/1/2005
I love it! It is so funny! And assuming by your descriptions all the guys are hot right?
| Jen chapter 20 . 1/1/2005
AWW!... m a guy like Jesse...*sigh* haha so cute. ) Keep updating!
| blueangel87 chapter 20 . 1/1/2005
gee this is getting more complicated by the chapter! I like it ;) pls update soon
| city-gal7 chapter 20 . 1/1/2005
they kissed! ah! yay! i liked this chapter. Jesse is SO cute!Just wanted to say keep it up and keep updating. Also i think Jesse was a bIT too mean to andy.