Reviews for America's Sweetheart
Pundit chapter 20 . 1/1/2005


Good Lord, woman! You're officially on my X-mas card list (not that I actually send them out, but if I did you would get one.) Jesse is SO HOT! Especaially putting his hands in her back pockets! :swoon:

He's such a stud.

Plus it's kind of funny to think that she punches him and like 5 minutes later they're making out. I don't think Clay will like it very much if he finds out though... didn't he threaten/warn Jesse to stay away from Eve already? Will they have to hide it (I mean, it won't be good PRESS either) or will Jesse tell Clay to shove it?

I love the little comments and pop culture refrences you make throughout the story. They're just really FUNNY and I can't get over them. And the wording, flow, and tone is great! You have a very good handle on language! I LOVE THIS STORY!

P. many chapters has it taken YOU to get to a kiss, huh? I think it was 20? And my story is ridiculously SLOW while yours is just... _ ( That's the best description I could come up with on short notice...yay for eloquence.)
jammi chapter 20 . 1/1/2005
nice chappie!
Roxy chapter 19 . 1/1/2005
Faster? Please?
nadljfaithglingh chapter 19 . 1/1/2005
Look! Look! I'm reviewing! That means more hotties, yes? YES?

*cough* Eh-heh...sorry 'bout that...;

Wow, Eve is NOT having a good day. I only hope that things can get worked out in their meeting, but I dunno...

Oh, and not that my opinion matters or anything, but Jesse's my fav. Definitely. (What IS it with the bad-boy type? And why can't I find a decent one in real life? *sigh*)

Thank you for being the first to review my story I plan to update today, but well shall see (I'm known for my procrastinating tendencies _) Happy New Year! -Kera
hollykesten chapter 19 . 1/1/2005
i htink i like Jesse the best, he seemed to actually want to help her!
mj chapter 19 . 1/1/2005
great chapter! keep on updating...i LUV this story!

molly jeane
pixy-dizzy chapter 19 . 1/1/2005
*wails* I have no clue who I like better...Clay or Jesse...*wails some more* They're both, hot for one thing, but I really like both their personalities.


Ahem. Yes, just thought I'd wish it to you and stuff...yes. Anyway. Short on time, can't write a longer review, so sorry! Please update soon!
Miss-Pirate chapter 19 . 1/1/2005
please hurry with the next one i love this story! HAPPY NEW YEAR!
Chandle chapter 13 . 1/1/2005
Hi i just wanted to say that i love the storyline but noticed in this chapter where Eve was taking Relling down the stair only you had written Luke instead of Clay.
Basketball Girl chapter 19 . 1/1/2005
Yup, two hotties alright! I'm glad you updated, plz update again soon!
MuffinMus chapter 19 . 1/1/2005
I really like this chapter :) ! UPDATE ASAP!
raniaur chapter 19 . 1/1/2005
Ooh! 3 hotties. Although seriously the way Clyde comes in my mind, I don't see him as a hottie. Oh well, UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! I can' believe the reporters are actually following her everywhere. Yeesh!
Chookstar chapter 19 . 1/1/2005
Wow this just keeps getting more and more screwed up doesn't it? Nothing seems to be going right for her AT ALL! Cept she has to guys - one being really hot *cough*jesse*cough*, and the other, well i don't like him but he's pretty funny - both going for her. Happy year as over rated as it all is, update soon!
PUNKGIRL123 chapter 19 . 12/31/2004
type MORE! SOO GOOD! so who does she go with? UPDATE!1
Jiro chapter 19 . 12/31/2004
Damn you! You're such a tease! I wanna know what happens next! :rips out hair: I can't TAKE this kind of stress! I'm mentally fragil and a scoach unstable. THIS CONSTITUTES CRUEL & UNUSUAL PUNISHMENT!

That being said, loved the motorcycle scene. Jesse Yum! He's sexy to the nth degree (can you tell I'm a dork?). Seriously, everything about him is hot. Especially since he's "friends" and all with Eve (he still has the hots for her BIG time, the poor baby). Plus he has a motorcycle! I think we ALL know who she should end up with, am I right? I am, aren't I? Yeah?

Great chappie! Update soon!
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