|Reviews for America's Sweetheart|
| Dina R chapter 18 . 12/29/2004
wow! i thought being famous would be fun, but now i see that thas completely wrong. poor eve. she better decide whom she's into though, and fast, b/c the guys are willing to fight for her. they ARE fighting for her. thats kinda cute thou. oh, n i like jesse. i hate clay. hes a fuckin chouvanistic (i misspelled it didnt i?) pig. he doesnt even really like her. shes just another trophy for him. so... GO JESS!
| shadowgirl618 chapter 18 . 12/29/2004
have i reviewed this story before? o.o oh well. who cares.
I LOVE THIS STORY! *huggle* don't know what i'm huggling but w/e. i luv dis story! it's hilarious. and has the best twists. my favorite character has to be either tori or jesse. tori because.. she's kind of insane. and jesse because.. well his name. ahahahah.
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! great job so far! lovin' it.
| double-life chapter 18 . 12/29/2004
Please write more
| FamousOneLiners chapter 18 . 12/29/2004
| JemG chapter 18 . 12/29/2004
Kickboxing...definitely want to get into that. I've been wanting a punching bag for years, but my parents are annoying and won't let me get one. Anyway, thought I'd put my two cents in and tell you I like Jesse best. He's cool. Gotta love the bad boy eh?
| tarnished chapter 1 . 12/28/2004
I forgot...to wish you a Happy Holiday!
Yes, i'm that pathetic. What can I say, tis the season [to butter up to your favorite authors.]
| tarnished chapter 18 . 12/28/2004
My dearest Merrsie-fairsie,
I'm dead.. my soul is haunting this fiction, and I shall not rest until it is over! MWAH HA HA! Eh.. I tried.
SO sorry for my lack of reviewing lately, Christmas was a bitch to me. But I'm back in action, baby. First off I must tell you how brilliant you are, loveses the new chapters. You crafty one, I love Clay more and more. And Jesse is back for my viewing pleasure, how nice. I wonder how long it'll take Eve to crumble under pressure. Two hot guys... a viper. COME ON!
Jesse walking in on the elevator scene was classic! Whooza! The suspense was killing me. And the party; right on. First the mutilated top, the La Bamba with El Clayto, Jesse and his sexy jacket, its all good. The sexual tension is going to erupt. I think Eve's been taking perverse lessons from me, sometimes I swear her thoughts are my thoughts. Weird. And things are getting scandalous I see. Poor Evie, the paranoia. I'd be the same way. Winnie the punching bag not one I've heard before. Nice.
And my reply to your reply to my review on chapter 15: Yes. I do want them all. I will have them. And their souls! *insert evil laughter here*
Seriously though... man... an update would be groovy.
| black robin chapter 18 . 12/28/2004
You have got to update. The first few chapters were kind of confusing but the story rocks.
| nadljfaithglingh chapter 18 . 12/28/2004
America's Slut, huh? Wow, those reporter-types are pretty harsh. At least it's only in the tabloids, though; those things go away after a couple of months or so. Too bad she can't sue. We learned in my Legal Studies class that once you become a celebrity of any kind, you lose part of your privacy rights (well, she could still sue if it's slander or libel, but they haven't gone that far...yet ). Oh, and kickboxing ROCKS. I'm taking Tae Kwon Do through the club at my University and it's AWESOME. We just started sparring and now I have bruises. LOTS of bruises ;; Write more soon, please! 0 -Kera (And can we have at least one hottie in the next chapter, please? Please? *sad puppy dog eyes* Oh, and action's good, too _~)
| Raven-Rose chapter 18 . 12/28/2004
Hey, great story so far. Very inventive. Nice dialoge and a relatable leading lady. Watch out for names, they've gotten switched a few times, and look out for spelling. Keep it up!
| Ashley Tucker chapter 18 . 12/28/2004
I love this story! Its great. Sometimes you will put other poeples name in it though. Like once you were talking about Clay and you said Luke...It's funny but it doesn't affect your story any, I just thought I would mention story! Update soon.
| Bunnyface chapter 18 . 12/28/2004
Mwahahahahaha... *coughing* *choking* *gagging* *DEAD!*So, let's try that again.. Mwahahahaha...Sorry, I am a bit hyper. This fic rocks, baby. Jesse and Clay rock too. But I prefer Jesse. *wink* *wink*Oh, now that Tarnished is out of the competition, can I have him?lolGetting serious, great fic. You have done a brilliant job in making the characters realistic. Their backgrounds are efficiently explained. Amazing. Please continue.
| DragonAiua chapter 18 . 12/27/2004
| fresianlady chapter 18 . 12/27/2004
haha yes you were very convincing. . .update soon!
| jammi chapter 18 . 12/27/2004
Ah! That is too good, I just sat down and read the whole thing, in one day. You should get this bad boy published. I love the hotties in the story too, they sound too Jesse, and Ducati's are sexy bikes. I want one so bad. Well, post SOON!