|Reviews for America's Sweetheart|
| Bellaria chapter 6 . 11/30/2007
i like this i hope you update one day its a good story :D:D
| Jestry chapter 6 . 11/26/2007
"Not a band geek, not a freak geek, which are all, you know, completely cool things to be, cooler than being cool, actually."
Band geek ftw.
| Jestry chapter 5 . 11/26/2007
| Jestry chapter 4 . 11/26/2007
Dude, everytime I read "Jesse Bond" I think James Bond.
Jesse Clay. :]
| Jestry chapter 2 . 11/26/2007
Haha, I love this.
It makes me laugh.
And it's... awesome.
| A Little Taste Of Heaven chapter 6 . 11/25/2007
Wow! Eve is so cool! She is hecka funny! Update soon.
| Miss Fairytale chapter 6 . 11/8/2007
She was so mean to Jesse, though it was funny! Great story!
| kimmy chapter 1 . 10/19/2007
omg! your stry was so awesome!
i hope you update soon!
but i cant beleive she went with that luke guy!gah!she is so stoOpid! i rekon she should go with jesse anywayz update soon!
| freakyAngel chapter 6 . 9/3/2007
Good Lord. Freaky much?
Yeah. Anyway. Uh, I don't think I like how this chapter ended, but that's just me. Gotta say I love Jesse here, though. Man he rocks. Haha.
By the way? Remember that shower scene at Jesse's place a couple of chapters ago? God, I thought I would die from laughing. Hilarious, the way Eve reacted. Scary though. I mean, I guess I just abhor embarrassment too much. And her reaction is seriously a potential embarrassment if it was me.
Okay, did I just imply I actually imagined myself in her shoes?
In any case, I think this story's great. Really. The plot's original so far, and the characters just rock so hard like you wouldn't believe.
Love Jesse, by the way.
And the way you portrayed Eve works real well. As in, once you read the story, you can't help but feel drawn to her. And her background is just so sucky for her, but she manages to pull through and even helps other people. Makes it so realistic and yet so cliched at the same time. It's not a bad thing, mind you.
'Kay, this review is getting too long and too out of point. Just wanted to say you rock. And I'm waiting for the next chapter. Almost peeing in my pants already. (Yeah, I haven't been pissing for three hours already, so it's seriously true.)
Anyway, please get back quick. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
(Oh yeah, loved what Eve did at the photoshoot by the way. Ya know, how she makes the other girl look a fool with her minimal makeup thing and all. Yeps.)
| Lethe's Oblivion chapter 6 . 9/3/2007
hi, just thought I'd put in a request for an update cus I love this story and it's awesome, and such ]
| Black and Bleeding Rose chapter 6 . 8/2/2007
please update. I really love the story...especially Jesse. So please please update. Great Story.
| Isobel Evans chapter 6 . 5/16/2007
Wow. I'm really confused right now. I mean, who's she going to pick!
I love Jesse and all. But I also lke Luke. And Clay. Haha. I wish she could have them all. Just dont end this story without a guy at the end. :D
Please continue, I'll still be reading! :D
| PhotographanAngel chapter 6 . 4/28/2007
Oh. My. Gosh.
I love your story :D
Have you read the Mediator series by Meg Cabot/Jenny Carrol?
Cuz one of her conversations with Jesse reminded me of one from that series...But w.e.
Anyways, keep writing!
| shylilgurlie chapter 6 . 4/18/2007
So I'm just reading along, rather enjoying myself, and OH MY GOSH it ended. :( Now I suppose that I will have to do my calculus homework. Boo. Nevermind that its 2 in the morning. Calculus homework for me and no more reading good stories online.
It was good though. Until it ended. :(
| A.K.A. Writer's Block chapter 6 . 4/11/2007
this is my new favourite story.
though i do not know why she got so pissed at jesse at the end.