another great chapter! i still think she should have both jesse and clay... wouldn't that be yummy 2 gorgeous guys fighting over you..m...lol please hurry and update! your story makes me happy, like a..a... flock of seagulls!

hey, I like :), I started reading this on mcbc, but then I lost it, and when I found it again, there were too many chapters and comments to slog through. ANyways, I really like. :D

Well, yes, Luke is kinda a wuss...but he's considerate to the fact that Eve has no idea what it's like to be famous...plus *I* think he's funny. This chapter was very funny! The article was so...tabloid-y. And I'm looking forward to what the reporters will do with the footage of her kick-boxing.

Hey!

I seriously doubt tarnished has abandoned you, she's like your biggest fan! She's probably on vacation, or something. America's Slut? There were other people in the apartment while the guys were there! And the guy was freaking injured! I mean, come on! Is Politic's Son gonna be pissed? I can't wait to hear what happens next! UPDATE SOON!

Luv ya,Tashi :)

I love this story! It's so good. You must update, I need to know what happens.

yay! u updated!...but what happened to jesse! _ anyways, i luv how u portray all of the reporters, its really funny...or maybe its just me...oh well, remember that u are so BORED that u just need to go WRITE MORE!

She should have seriously punched that guy. and Corey Flemming is a bastard! seriously..the things he said..arghh! but its good..keep it up!

btw, it's Lossiera Silverwind with a more apt name (or so I thought).

Anyway, as usual it's just brilliant. Eve is such a great character, and so funny! Although, more of Jesse would be cool. If he was a real guy, I'd so be attracted to him. Nice work!

So how's everything going? Are you feeling any better? I hope so. Anyway I better go, it's my bedtime!

Take care,CG aka LS

Hey, at least the Sunday tabloid heading is more flattering, right? She should totally sue them for slander. Or is it libel? I think it's libel.

Side note: I was wondering if I could plug this story in my next chapter (if I ever get over my writer's block that is). I LOVE it; it's so funny/good/FUNNY and I want to share the joy with everyone I can. I don't want to do it without your concent though so...

Anyway, I hope to see more Jesse/Luke/Clay... and did I mention Jesse? This story is AMAZING!

Hey! Nice Chapter. Although I'd say it was just pretty much her routine, and stuff. But seriously, first they turn her into 'America's Sweetheart' when she doesn't want to, i mean that's going far, but 'America's Slut'? That's going TO FAR. Reporters are extremely nosy, I don't see how famouse ppl stand 'em. Don't u? Buty, gr8 chapter. :D Write more soon.

Wow...That's mostly what I have to say,just...wow!This was such a flippin' cool chapter!Yes,obscenely long,as you said,but AWESOME!I can barely wait until the next'n'!Oh'm'gah!I'm all excited now!XD Whoohoo! now that you know how very very much I loved this,I'll let ya go write the next on now,scoot!See ya next update_.

God Bless,Chelsea aka Sophomore .

this is really good. update soon!

whats gonna happen? UPDATE SOON! P.S. cLAY AND EVE?

Hey. Sorry I haven't reviewed in so long, but as you know, thanks to my rant, I have been incredibly busy taking care of my dad. My bro's fine (39.9 degrees is, basically, a temp of over 100degrees). ANYHOOS, I really, really need an update. I absolutely love all the hot characters... I think Jesse's my fav, but Clay and Luke come in close second... heh. OK, gotta dash, but you're a brill writer, sweetie, PLEASE grace us with another chapter!