| Reviews for America's Sweetheart |
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   rock 'n' roll junkie chapter 17 . 12/24/2004 Oh wow, things are certainly getting complicated. I liked how you brought back Jesse, he's a sweet guy, yet rebellish, but I love Clay too 'cause he's like a bad boy too, sort of. Well I'm torn between choosing, oh yes and Luke, well he's not really in the story enough for me to even care, hehe. Well keep up the fabulous work! |
| Pundit chapter 17 . 12/24/2004 :SQWEE!: |
| hollykesten chapter 17 . 12/24/2004 Loved the post, and ya, Eve is screwed... senators son... America's Sweetheart, its gonna end up like a made up love triangle... Keep up the good work! |
| elvis lives in my fridge chapter 17 . 12/24/2004 MHM! JESSE! |
| arachibutyrophobia chapter 17 . 12/24/2004 no chapter is ever too long ;-)can't wait till the next update... my gosh things are going out of control...omg everyones gonna flip when the pictures come out...i cant wait to see what happens!happy holidays, birdytamel |
| LilLaTLuv chapter 16 . 12/24/2004 Hey! Don't let them screw with your head! They are just stupid! Good job! I loved this! Great chappie! And long! He told Jesse not to kiss her and then he does the same thing and even goes an extra mile. So, is Clay nice or not? I get confused. Great job! UPDATE SOON! |
| raniaur chapter 16 . 12/24/2004 Awesome! I like this story! Please write more. One thing though. I normally assume that every chapter's beginning starts with Eve's P.O.V, so to make it a little eassier, could you state who's P.O.V it is in the beginning too? I'd appreciate it. Please update more soon! :D |
| JemG chapter 16 . 12/22/2004 Nice, good long chapter. Pretty funny actually. Anyway, good job, post again soon! |
| double-life chapter 16 . 12/21/2004 OH MY GOD! Amazing chapter! I loved it! I feel so bad for Jesse though. I want him and Eve together by the end of the story! He is so adorable. Aw! Hurry and update soon. |
| Miss-Pirate chapter 16 . 12/21/2004 yay great story! forget about luke, i'm torn between clay and jesse...hm... can't she jsut have both? lol *gives puppy dog eyes* please hurry and update! |
| nadljfaithglingh chapter 16 . 12/20/2004 Yes, dear, but they were all SET-UP DATES. And half of them were BLIND DATES. *silent shudder* (I don't care how helpful your friends try to be, do NOT trust them! They set you up with all of the mediocre - or worse - guys and take the cute and fun ones for themselves...) Oh well. ANYway, this chapter was interesting (you pretty much summed up why it was so in your a/n's ) and has left me with two feelings: one part of me is refreshed and happy and can't wait to read the next chapter, and the other part of me is slowly dying inside because I want to know what happens next! ARGH! Hope you feel better and Happy Whatever-Holiday-It-Is-That-You-Celebrate! (and if you don't celebrate any, Happy Time-Off-Of-School! 0) -Kera |
| hazel chapter 16 . 12/20/2004 more bonds. :) |
| DOQUIE chapter 16 . 12/20/2004 interesting, i prefer jesse to clay thoughpompous ass |
| Emilia chapter 16 . 12/20/2004 I just read every chapter of this story in like 45 minutes. It's friggin hilarious! Seriously I'm getting strange looks from my bro cuz I keep , and I love Jesse and if he's already taken then may I pretty please with sugar on top have Andy or Leo? Oh who am I kidding? Just throw me a friggin bone here! Please for my SANITY (or what's left of it) update SOON!:P |
| DragonAiua chapter 16 . 12/20/2004 whoo! Very good very good...hahaha, building up! |