Reviews for America's Sweetheart
a fan chapter 16 . 12/20/2004
omg i luv u so much!thanx!...but it would be even better if u wrote A LOT more *nudge* nudge**wink*wink*...or GAVE me all of the yummy guys in ur story!lol...i'll settle for whomever eve doesnt get...luv jesse the mostest tho...but it would be weird cuz i practically have the same name! u have a gift for u better use it! :)
Sazzmatazz chapter 16 . 12/20/2004
May I just point out that you are HILARIOUS? I mean, each and every chapter you made me crack up.

Second, excellent story! I love it. It's really brilliant. I hope you post more soon.


P.S. More Jesse?
The Queen of Squirrels chapter 16 . 12/20/2004
I wouldn't say too shy to review, just kind of at a loss of what to say, other than the usual. Cute story and I like the humor in your writing style. I don't know how you manage to update so ungodly fast, but keep it up!
rsgone chapter 16 . 12/20/2004
Absolutely hilarious story. It actually quite inspired me. :D Keep up the good work!
sexygirl chapter 16 . 12/20/2004
its really good! update soon! btw i think clay and eve are cute together! pleaze put more of them together on GOOD terms...jesse's okay but clay is WAY Better...CLAY AND EVE ALL THE WAY!
gothicrebal chapter 16 . 12/20/2004
meh i dont like clay i love your story but id rather hav jesse any day and his bike .~
elvis lives in my fridge chapter 16 . 12/20/2004
I absoloutely loved this chapter. But I still want more Jesse.
fresianlady chapter 16 . 12/20/2004
hey heyi want a jesse!teehee. . .anyways. . i like grandpa f. . .tori makes me laugh and she has a good taste in food. . .lol. . .anyways update soon!
BoredomKills0620 chapter 16 . 12/20/2004
ShaZAM!What a way for Jesse to come back.!*Is clapping excitedly cuz Jesse punched Clay*Whoo,that was great!Nice,long chapter;that was pretty cool_.So all THREE next chappie,you say? should be wonderful!Right,well I'll see ya next update(*Crosses fingers*Be soon,be soon,be soon...).

God Bless,Chelsea aka Sophomore .
mycherrywolf chapter 16 . 12/20/2004
brilliant as usual. I love your new stuff. what was andy doing there anyway? i didn't quite get that.

if you're interested... (did I ask this before yet?)
hollykesten chapter 16 . 12/20/2004
loved the update, well done, but i htink Clay and Jesse should make up, and eve should figure out what to do about it all!
blueangel87 chapter 16 . 12/20/2004
interesting..i dont know which couple i like the best! keep up the great work
MuffinMus chapter 16 . 12/20/2004
Uh, I really like this chapter... please update ASAP!
Pundit chapter 16 . 12/20/2004
I would be in the corner, curled up in the fetal position, and weeping pathetically. There would probably be snot involved too, just to let you know, so it wouldn't be a pretty picture.

Great chapter though! I loved it. Clay's such a hypocrite! AWESOME! And all 3 boys next chapter? Huzzah! Clay's grandpa was absolutely adorable, by the way. I hope to see more of him. Thanks for posting and happy holidays _
Jen chapter 15 . 12/19/2004
lol I'll laugh if they get stuck in the elevator. ) I got kind of confused in the elevator scene. Good job. Love the story. Keep updating
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