|Reviews for America's Sweetheart|
| nadljfaithglingh chapter 15 . 12/19/2004
E-heh, sorry for the 'doctor statistic' ; I'll think before I type next time; promise *grin* Eve and a guy (a very hot guy) stuck on the elevator. Alone. Heh, and we all know where that led to last time..._~ (okay, I think that my *coughunhealthycough* erm, _dedication_ to you story is not, well, healthy! Good thing you're not published, yet or I'd be broke! ) Although when you DO get published, I must be informed, okay? (and a signed copy! do I get a signed copy? *puppy dog eyes*)
Okay...now that we have successfully lost yours truly to the ever incessant habit of tangents and rambling...(maybe THAT's why I never get asked on that important second date. Hmm...)
Keep on keepin' on, okay? And remember - An update a day keeps the doctor away! (update, apple, same diff; language is too relative anyway..._) -Kera
| double-life chapter 15 . 12/19/2004
I absolutely LOVE this story! You have to keep writing and updating! I don't think I can spend a day without continueing to read this story. Please continue!
| tarnished chapter 15 . 12/19/2004
I'm away for a little bit and I already missed two chapters? Whooza! My sincerest apologies on your doctor visit from hell. It sounds painful, and I'm stating the obvious, go me. Seriously though, I hope you get to feeling in ship shape (though I never really understood what that phrase meant, so I hope its good.)
Onto the review! I'm loving the Clay fluffiness. I'm beginning to love him more and more. Its becoming clear that Eve is having some sort of attraction to him (hell - I'd question her sexuality if she hadnt!) and I'm also seeing another sweet side of the lovely Clay. Reading about the sexual frustration going on in the elevator was enough to give me goosebumps! Mwahha! Which is a good thing. Do it again.
And might I just add how absolutely, positively, most utterly, horrifyingly wrong it was to end the story on such a note? The two of them, alone, in an elevator? *waggles eyebrows* One could imagine what is going through my head right now, tee hee.
Anyway, keep up the shagalicious job sweets, and keep those yummy chapters coming! :)
| Choir girl chapter 15 . 12/19/2004
Chapter 15? Already? I can't believe I spent that long reading it!Oh I'm hooked now. This story is excellent! Grammar, plot, characters, humour... everything!I'll try and wait patiently for the next installement, although I can't guarantee anything!
Doesn't it suck being sick and then the doctors not being able to tell you what's wrong? I know how you feel. I was diagnosed with every respiratory disorder under the sun bar SARS until they came to the conclusion that it was bronchitis. I've never been asthmatic in my life, yet I was perscribed with two inhalers and a bottle of pills. However, they only perscribed me with this AFTER I'd thrown up in my end of year English exam *rolls eyes*.
Anyway, I hope you get better soon in time for Christmas! Take care,L.S.
| Pundit chapter 15 . 12/19/2004
Yay! You updated! I have been computerless for a bit so thus the lack of reviews on my part. This is seriously one of those stories that I LOOK for. You know, the ones that you assign to the "Author Alert" and when you check your e-mail SCAN for? Maybe you don't... but anyway, this is one of them. I'd like to see what was going through Clay's mind in the elevator. Interesting... Heh heh heh. Thanks for the latest chapter! It's AWESOME!
| molly jeane chapter 15 . 12/19/2004
wonderful! absolutely awesome...i can't wait until you update- do that soon, please! i'm at the edge of my seat!
| arachibutyrophobia chapter 15 . 12/19/2004
I just love this story so much...its so annoying when i reach the end of the chapter and there's nothing more! PLEASE update soon! thnx!
| elvis lives in my fridge chapter 15 . 12/19/2004
AH! I LOVE IT!
I like Jesse better, though! Bring Jesse back!
| BoredomKills0620 chapter 15 . 12/19/2004
Haha!Losers!That's what they get! XD And what was that "oh shit" about?Was it the foot or no?Or maybe it was something else?*WinkWink*Ah,well.I'm dumb...So.!When will we see more Jesse?Eh?EH? know how it update soon,see ya then,yada yada yada.~.
God Bless,Chelsea aka Sophomore .
| pixy-dizzy chapter 15 . 12/19/2004
*sighs happily and dreamily* Wow, I've got it bad for Clay. Yesh, more so than Jesse, sad to say. Lol. Great job on inventing all these characters; all with their own personalities and quirks! Your writing has matured, slightly, although it was still excellent to begin with. So. Wonderful story, cute chapter...(Why is Clay in...pain? Maybe that'll be cleared up in future chapters, huh?) Please update soon!
| LilLaTLuv chapter 15 . 12/19/2004
Aw! And we love you too! Thank you so much for updating! I WANT LUKE! If he isn't too bad, that is. But you haven't gone really deep into his character yet. I really liked this chapter. Clay is having a hard time with his own rule. Hehehe. And she has seriously injured the two biggest hotties in her entire school. Obviously she, uh, does like guys, just doesn't like like them. If you know what I mean. Oh, and no prob. You deserve all the sympathy you can get! UPDATE SOON! We NEED you! And Eve!
Luv ya,Tashi :)
| DragonAiua chapter 15 . 12/19/2004
I really enjoyed this chapter! Man, this girl is going to have one hard choice!
| Tor chapter 15 . 12/19/2004
I kinda want Clay to do something so that Eve hits him too. Two black eyes, both caused in the elevator.. :-P And I can't help not wanting Clay to get ahead of Jessie. I, of course, have a thing for even pretend bad boys. :-D Can't wait for the next update.
| wanderer chapter 15 . 12/19/2004
haha.. u seem to have a lot of elevator scenes! hehe.. how cute.. i like this chapter.. though it kinda gets confusing.. and i wonder if clay's intentions are really good..
| mycherrywolf chapter 15 . 12/18/2004
oh! I don't know which is better, ClayxEve or EvexJesse! Anyway, very good chappie! I don't understand why Clay didn't want to get down from the elevator when they went to visit Becky... n_n Update soon!