haha. I love this story SO MUCH. I've followed it since like chapter 4 but I dont review as often as I should. I LOVE IT. ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT! It's hilarious. You left a huge cliff hanger this time! PLease get another chapter up as fast as you CAN!LOVE THIS STORY-Roxy

This is a really cute story! I can't wait till the next chapter! Update soon!

Ugh! You're making me a little angry here. Okay, if you insist on turning Clay into a softie, I guess I'll support your decision, but don't think I like it. Jesse is supposed to win Eve's heart, smart one. And omg omg omg I just had this brilliant idea: Luke and Tori hit it off in the end. Wouldn't that just be a hoot? Ha! I'll see you next chapter.

i luv ur story so much!it made me so happy that u updated, esp. since today is my b-day!...tho i wish u had written about jesse...anyways, keep writing! i wish i could write as well as u (then i wouldnt just be a random fan on this site...lol)!

whatever happened to bonds? i miss him. bring him back, and goodbye to luke!

i'm absolutely loving this story! it's super funny and your characters are so well written. you really get into their heads and make their voices sound different. and you actually give depth to the stereotyped jerk character of clay so that i'm starting to like him, despite myself. i'm a jesse fan so far! please keep writing!

Aw poor you ( I can completely sympathise cause in the past few days, I feel like I have visited on the hell dimensions. My mother is so completely ignoring us (me and my brothers) it's not funny, she's out the country too so that's not too difficult, though I doubt we'll even see her when she gets back, my dad has been diagnosed with a heart disease and the beginning of a heart attack, so i've been darting to and from the hospital and EUGH i hate seeing him like that, my brother got sick and his temp shot up to 39.9 degrees and i had to take care of him while my OTHER brother decides he wants to go play soccer and comes back 4 hrs after curfew. And yes, like you, to top it off i got my period after skipping for two months and now cannot move and have dumped myself in front of the computer.

I realise I'm not supposed to be ranting but you had one so it's only fair.

Anyway, America's Sweetheart is one the best stories I have ever read on FictionPress, I love how completely real the emotions are, we're (cliche line coming) 'completely in touch with the characters'. I really love it, though, and Clay is a hottie but then so's Jesse and what's his face. but i so want her to end up with Jesse! PLEASE? I'll buy you chocolate chip cookies. Well *smirks* I'll buy them with every intention of giving them to you, but after knowing that there's no way possible I will glug them down myself. And you will feel satisfied. You WILL.

OK, I've got to go check up on my dad. Please update soon!

Lady Agatha

This is an awesome piece of literature. I think Jesse and Tori are my favourite characters,not as a pair though.

keep up the good work! :D

Okay I am very amused right now. I just realized there are mostly girls reading this. I mean I am a girl, but still, it's hilarious. lol I'm not slow...well not really, just a sort of funny epiphany...haha. Yummy story, update!

I know what you mean i'm anemic too! I hate when they always have to take blood samples. This nursie lady missed my vein so she was prodding around under my skin trying to get the needle to hit a vein in my arm. it hurt like fricken hell! stupid great, intense chapter. i like how eve isn't immune to hot guys. .

Thank you so much for your 's still really hard to believe that it happened and really hard to deal with since it only happened didn't even look like himself at the funeral of like a mannequin(sp?),which made me just lose it when I saw I'm sorry for your loss drunk idiots are gonna kill us all...Again I'm very far as the chapter,it was great!A little cute awkwardness between -w-w-w!PLease update very very soon!...And I need more _?See ya next chappie.

God Bless,Chelsea aka Sophomore .

I love the story, I didn't read it before because I didn't know if it would be good by the summary (plus I was always doing other stuff). I hope that you find out what is wrong and you get better! My sister has a problem with nurses sometimes when she gets blood taken. One is really good, but the other isn't(the nurses). And she has two good viens in both arms, so it shouldn't be hard for them to find one of them. So, it could be worse when you get your blood taken.

Bleh. Forget all the Clay/Eve (did I mention I love that name?) mushyness. Where is Jesse? I lurve him muchly more than Clay. . .because leather and motorcycles and black hair are all extremely yummy. he he And I truly feel for you. Periods suck major $$.

Hey!

I have to say, you have a wonderful personality and you definately keep the laughs coming! I want Jesse, too! He is my very, very, very, very, very, very fav! I agree with tarnished, get that boy naked, NOW! Lol. Love the story and you BETTER keep it up! UPDATE SOON! And I am so sorry about the whole thing with the doctor and the period. Boys think they are so tough, I'd like to see them go through that stuff. Stupid jerks! Sorry, got the grumbly-umby's today! Have a nice day! (Don't know why I said that, just sorta popped in there...) And keep writing!

Luv ya,Tashi :)