Reviews for America's Sweetheart
stained innocence13 chapter 14 . 12/17/2004
damn! i feel for u! anyways bout d update... hahahaha! poor clay! so can i have clay? *chin quivers* pwease... *puppy dog eyes* *sniff* i lve it! hahahah! did i jst see a MOMENT bwahahaha! loved it! *clears throat* now if u dont mind *grabs jesse and holds onto him tightly* ill be going. *trys to cary him but falls* oh shit... MORE SOONER THAN SOOn! _
cramel07 chapter 14 . 12/17/2004
omg! that is the worst list of symptoms i have heard since my friend became allergic 2 life! well, almost. breathing and exercise keep writing! this is one of the best fics i've read! same with the jessia ravynheart one!
SEXYGIRL chapter 14 . 12/17/2004
OMG...soo god! i like clay...but dang hes huge...anyways post more SON! (especially with clay and eve in it...:))
Trmpetplaya1 chapter 14 . 12/17/2004
Wow, tough deal. I hate it when the doctor's don't know what's wrong (did you know that two out of every seven doctorial prognoses are guess? wait, I don't think that helped any...) That happened to me with breathing; I had to go through all these expense tests and the STILL, to this DAY (four years later) do not know what is wrong with me. *sigh* Well, I hope that your situation turns out better than it has been. And I commend your strength for updating even though you're not doing well. You're my hero (Oh, and you have me COMPLETELY lost on the Eve/Clay deal. Congrats! 0) Later days -Kera
hollykesten chapter 14 . 12/17/2004
well looks like i've got another story to add to my list of stories... keep up the good work, i hope she and Luke reconcile, but i think i like bonds better than rellings, but anywayz... awesome job
DragonAiua chapter 13 . 12/17/2004
update soon...very good :-)

yes, they ARE cute.
J chapter 13 . 12/16/2004
haha hot story. sometimes it gets confusing because you dont tell us right away who the person talking is.
BJ chapter 13 . 12/15/2004
hey this is the first story on here that i've made a review for so feel special. :D you've written an excellent story. it's amazing. and yes you have confused me on how to feel towards clay. though i am still leaning towards disliking him a bit.

anways hope you post more soon!

Merry Christmas (or whatever holiday you celebrate :) )
xpressgirl chapter 13 . 12/15/2004
CLAY IS soo cute...he's prolly not that bad on the inside...write another chapter from his POV. it would be awesome if he went with Eve! BUT that isnt happening...well at least...pleaze...dont make him go with anyone else! least that...make him a dont do he dosent go with eve he doesnt go with anyone okay? pleaze do that at least...WELL POST MORE SON! SO GOD! BTW i loved where she drove the viper...awsome scene...i was wondering if they would ever do that to girl in a story and u did! awesome! POST MORE!
arachibutyrophobia chapter 1 . 12/14/2004
Hi,I just want to say this is a great story with great people whom we fall in love with yet are as flawed as everyone else. Kudos, and please keep writing!birdytamel
mycherrywolf chapter 13 . 12/14/2004
Clay ain't -that- bad. he's kai. nice chPpie but i really wish your chapters were a bit longer.
Trmpetplaya1 chapter 13 . 12/13/2004
Yay! I liked this chapter! (and the last one, too, since I missed it's update) Yup, the confusing feelings abound w/ Clay (although I must say I am definitely a Jess fan ) Anyway, can't wait for the next update! Writing is good, procrastinating is bad..._ -Kera
cramel07 chapter 13 . 12/13/2004
hey! my god this is so god! i love BOTH the guys!but clay is kinda a psycho...pls pls pls update soon!
Raging Libra chapter 13 . 12/13/2004 this story. Can't really decide which guy i like better, but i'm kinda leaning towards mr. bad boy right now. and yes, clay does sound like a friggin psycho. one can only wonder how much he's been paying to stay out of a nice white jacket and a comfortable padded room. hehe, anywayz, can't wait for the next update! hope it's soon!
pixy-dizzy chapter 13 . 12/13/2004
*sighs* Me. Loves. Clay. Oh, yes, Clay's utter Clay-ness is now making me revert to caveman-speak. I can't help it...I love the slightly evil blonde guys. Can't get enough of them, you know? Lol. But what WOULD be fun would be if there was one guy who didn't COMPLETELY like Eve...and they got together...But please, ignore me. I know some people don't like people telling them how to write the story...Lol, I'm included in that group. So, sorry!

Anyway. Awesome two chapters, and please update soon!
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