Reviews for America's Sweetheart
sexygirl chapter 13 . 12/13/2004

CLAY ANd EVE ARE SO CUTE TOGTHER...HE may be a jackass on the outside bbut he really cute on the inside-i think-pleaz make em go together!-thats not gona happen :( but i hope ot does...clay and eve are mad cute together!
it's only castles burning chapter 13 . 12/13/2004
Intense Awsomeness! I am psychotically in love with BOTH of the leading men of this story. Is that possible? Love the car scene!
stained innocence13 chapter 13 . 12/13/2004
hahaha! aw! clay's such a wuss pala! and i thought he wud try 2 be a man! hahaha! lol! love the update! more sooN!
Lil Bazza chapter 13 . 12/13/2004
Wow. That Chapter was really good - especially the part in the car. I want a friend like her. She sounds lke such a cool person to hang around with. And her friends. God, they sound hillarious. They sound like my friend when it comes to Lord of The Rings. Addicted. Keep up the great work - I can't wait for more!
Celtic-Princess344 chapter 13 . 12/13/2004
Oh My God! You are so going to be a professional writer someday! I love this story! You kept me on the edge of my seat! Also I think it was great that you left out some parts as it keeps the reader interested. Can't wait till the next chapter! You rock!
chookstar chapter 13 . 12/13/2004
it would have been cute - if it was jesse! lol great chapter dude!
rock 'n' roll junkie chapter 13 . 12/12/2004
Okay, now my vote is changing to Clay, lol. Yea, Jess is a God, but I mean Clay is really hott too damn. And that was so hilarious. Too funny, they're like a really funny couple! Keep up the awesome work!
I luv Sigma Phi chapter 13 . 12/12/2004
I knoq you said you like Craig but I really think Eve should end up with Jesse because he is nicer and cooler and stuff and girls always end up with the rich popular jerks. But yeah I still love your story and hope you up date soon
BoredomKills0620 chapter 13 . 12/12/2004
Aw!That WAS cute..However,I DO believe I like Jesse & Eve 's pretty cute with her too..I liked the last chapter & the one before that.I haven't reviewed for a 'bout that.;.Things have happened(like my friend's little brother[15 years old]died;he was hit by a drunk driver while walking down his street;.;)Sorry again for not 't wait till the next chappie so PLEASE update soon!Ta ta for now..

God Bless,Chelsea aka Sophomore .
FrozenWaterFaerie chapter 13 . 12/12/2004
So does Eve actually HAVE her license? Or was she just joking?
LilLaTLuv chapter 13 . 12/12/2004

Hilarious chappie! But why did you say Luke hit his foot on something on the stairs? I thought it was Clay? I didn't like him threatening the guy I like. Meanie. But, yeah, I have mixed feelings! Thanks for FINALLY bringing in America's Hottie. Took ya long enough. JK. Loved that chappie, too. Keep this up! I can't wait for the update!

Luv ya,Tashi :)
tarnished chapter 13 . 12/12/2004
The next chapter gets *cuter*? If it gets any cuter, I just might have to kiss you. (no no, dont run off okay, I was only joking.) But I was beyond happy that Clay didnt turn into the devil incarnate this chapter like I had guessed.. actually he was quite adorable with his widdle footsie problem. And Eve, driving the Viper? Completely scandalous, hilarious.. I loved it to bits.

Anyway, I'm on a high right now due to the fact I just read chapter 12 not long ago, and then come back and find chapter 13 waiting to be viewed and REviewed. Major brownie points. Even if the shecksey Jesse wasn't in this chapter.

Now I demand more cuteness! Whee!
stained innocence13 chapter 12 . 12/12/2004
wow! jst saw ur fic now and i ABSOLUTELY LOVED it! how can i have NOT seen this before? *bangs head*damn... i think i jst lost a couple more brain cells! anyways!1 please update soon! clay can be an ass... hahahaha! hot greek god Jesse! oh yez! can i have him? pwetty pwease... *sniffle* lol!1 MORE SOON! and wen i mean soon... i mean SOONER THAN SOON! _
DragonAiua chapter 12 . 12/12/2004
yay! you updated! do it again! (update that is)
joan chapter 1 . 12/12/2004
love your story...

please don't pull the plug!

liked the dialogue between clay and jess.

you go, girl!
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