|Reviews for America's Sweetheart|
| Ravestna chapter 6 . 3/26/2007
plz update soon plz plz plz it's really good. personally i want clay to get eve but thats just me but plz update soon we'd all apreciate it pretty pretty plz with a cherry on top :)
x X x Ravestna x X x
| Finwe chapter 6 . 3/5/2007
Well, I must say, I'm rooting for Jesse. *grins* I really like your story. Made me laugh lots. :) I hope you have more for this! ? Please? (Darn those jealous, hot-head-type guys, always messing up a nice romance with a good plot twist lol) Can't wait for another chapter!
| Kadekksys chapter 6 . 2/12/2007
This story is great! I love that she's going back and forth between the two guys but isn't being cruel about it... that sounded strange. Anyways, I noticed that you haven't updated in well over a year. I hope that maybe you'll pick this back up again, cause it's really good. Loved it! Keep it up!
| books4me chapter 6 . 1/26/2007
No! Poor Jesse.
Great story, looking forward to reading more (if that applies).
* Books4mE *
| HeartbreakersHorizon chapter 1 . 1/16/2007
A very good start to a great story.
| Holly Harper chapter 1 . 1/9/2007
you know the thing you have in your profile? is it about you? cause if it is you should write a story on fiction press about it. just a suggestion.
| shadowed-kisses chapter 6 . 12/28/2006
OOh nice ending. I want Eve and Clay to be together D. Don't make Luke and her be together. Update sooner!
| Simply Complicated chapter 6 . 12/22/2006
man thats messed up! gosh i mean theyd make such a cute couple, yd she have 2 go all bitchy? u should update and not give up on this story!
| A Different Kind of Yellow chapter 6 . 12/14/2006
Hey... I am seriously loving this story - and the long chapters! Such a pity that you haven't updated in a really long time. I can hardly talk lol. Such a hypocrite me. Supposed to be doing some work but I can't be arsed to switch computers. It'll take me 20 mins so I'm doing it tomorrow morning. I've been in uni since 9am... least they can do is give me a little slack! its for a video... 'a day in the life of an emo'. Lol. dunno why I'm telling you this, but anyways. Continue soon, please. or if you have writer's block just tell me how you think it'll end. Ta! Kirsty x
| codyismypup chapter 6 . 12/2/2006
I don't know your story escaped my grasps. it's so good. I'm so gushing but its not my fault. ur fault all the way 'cause there are too many hot guys and its going to make me combust. ah!love it!-Avey
| wilted paper flowers chapter 6 . 11/25/2006
AW EVE JUST HAD TO RUIN IT, DIDN'T SHE? UGH! Hmph. Annoying sometimes. XD
I hope Jesse and Eve end up together, and I hope Luke Garcia goes and sticks his head down a toilet or something. Some Clay interference would be appreciated as well. D But does Clay/Luke even LIKE Eve as much as Jesse does? 00' I'm all confused.
And I'm kinda confused with the friendship between Tori and Eve, because Tori and Eve don't act like it. Um...yeah. Just some improvisation on that would be great. :D
| violet-eyez chapter 6 . 11/21/2006
aw but i like her and jesse togther
| wandless chapter 6 . 10/10/2006
Hey! I really enjoyed reading your story. One thing is, I think you should make it clearer who's PoV it is, because sometimes I'll be reading a paragraph or two not knowing who's PoV it is. And then I figure it out. Great story, please update soon!
| xmjx chapter 6 . 9/25/2006
eh'. i guess i'll jst waiit. 4 an UPDATE!. xD
| jekodama chapter 6 . 9/9/2006
Are you ever going to continue this? I certainly hope so! Please? pretty please with sugar on top? and cherries and whipped cream? and homemade choco chip cookies? C'mon! you know you want to eat that!