Reviews for America's Sweetheart |
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pixy-dizzy chapter 10 . 12/6/2004 Yesh, tis me, again. *poses* Lol, just kidding, just kidding! Totally understand about review replies. They take forever, no? Take up time when you'd much rather be updating...Hehe. I love Clay. Will we see more of Clay in the future? Please update soon! |
DragonAiua chapter 10 . 12/6/2004 finally! hm, who is the guyon her porch?arg, I syympathize. Being followed around by a bunch of reporters would suck. |
Cooties chapter 10 . 12/6/2004 Is the guy on her porch Luke? OO! I hope so! I love this story so much! It is so good! |
Chookstar chapter 10 . 12/5/2004 "if you ever, ever, take my Eve on the back of this piece of shit you call a motorcycle again I’ll cut off each of your fingers and toes and feed them to Fifi.” - Holy damn you are hilarious! The lines are so worth me tearing my eyes away from the hot hot guy on tv lol! And looky looky i'm updating on the same day you posted! Sad arn't i? i just spent the whole day making a daisy chain and being one with my inner child. ...yeah you muct think i'm really weird huh? Don't answer that, just write another chapter, i wanna know about this new stranger - but he best not be getting between my jesse(your jesse but you don;t mind sharing right?) and eve cause they kick ass! |
Jolly B chapter 10 . 12/5/2004 WoW! I LIKE Keith. he's such a sweetie, a scary sweetie, but a sweetie soon ktoodles. |
tarnished chapter 10 . 12/5/2004 Yes indeed, who is this guy on her porch? More importantly, is he hott? Is he a Calvin Klein underwear model? Does he have washboard abs? Does he take long, steamy hot showers? Does he have a number? You know.. the usual. Even if hes wearing a red plaid shirt. What? Is it my fault my hormones are still raging from the last chapter (which I just re-read for my viewing pleasure, btw) Actually, yes it is.. same difference. Whatever. Awesome chapter as usual. Bonds is sexy and suave as usual.. shaking in his combat boots over Fifi. Ehm. The dog sounds.. toothy. Certainly unlike any other Fifi I've heard of. Nice. And I was only kidding about killing Eve off (okay *fine* semi-kidding) But hey, if you're offering Bonds to me after you're through with him.. I'll hold that against you until the day I die. Mwahaw. And Eve is *so* getting to Bonds. I cant wait until they both crack. It'll be fabtabashagalistic, baby. Whee! (yes, its one of those caffeine-intolerant days.. sadly.) Anyhow, update soon, please ;) Cause it just rocks my dirty little socks off. |
d-unit chapter 10 . 12/5/2004 thank you so much for clearing up the confusion! i mean i really felt like there was this chapter that everyone else read, and i missed it! anyways, happy u updated, and i need more bonds! |
a fan chapter 9 . 12/4/2004 please keep writing, i luv ur story so much. if u ever get it done and published, i will totally buy it. i luv jesse so much! lol ur stalker(jk...or am i?...) |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/3/2004 She cant remember what is killing her own mother? |
Emma chapter 9 . 12/1/2004 Gosh. Jesse sounds so hot. I need more of him. Those two so belong together. |
I luv Sigma Phi chapter 9 . 11/30/2004 I love this story, it's different from everything else I have read on here and I really love the characters they have so much depth to them. I look forward to reading more |
winter chapter 9 . 11/30/2004 hahahaha- this is fun! And update before the weekend! |
gatepost chapter 9 . 11/30/2004 ok, I was laughing all the way through that, and usually I dont't review (I know, I'm bad) but I want to keep reading, please! Maybe I'll go and do some more reviews so you can make up your quota. I totally understand how tarnished got her it up, please . . .*begging on knees*, oh, and you have some grammatical problems and a name mixup in there, if you bother with that. (makes it so much nicer to read *bat eyelids*)keep those fingers on that keyboard. |
Chookstar chapter 9 . 11/30/2004 ARGH THAT WAS SO FUNNY! Oh my lord that was great! Wow that was a great suggestion by tarnished, and very well executed by you my friend cause you are FANTASTIC! Oh dear i'm going to be cracking up about that for a while now, thanks for that image. I really want a Jesse! lol, i'm having some issues with accepting my jesse live in a different island from me so this story makes me laugh and i LOVE it! I'm now going to discontinue kissing ass and go to bed! Can't wait for the next update! CHOOKSTAR* |
Chookstar chapter 8 . 11/30/2004 Ok i just re-read over some of the earlier chapters to see if i had missed the whole lets-punch-jesse episode but i can't find it. So i'm a little confused, and am going to blame that on it bein 10.57pm&i havn't slept in a while(um that would be 2 days) but am i to asume it happened off 'screen' as such? Urgh don't mind me. Lol i loved the early bus scene it was great, well written the whole chapter! |