Reviews for America's Sweetheart |
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Chookstar chapter 7 . 11/30/2004 I say you hook tori and clay up cause that would be cute. And it would stop clay from interferring with jesse and eve lol! Yeow NZ made it into the plot! I like it, so proud of my little country lol! Tori's hilarious by the way shes great, a little graphic, but great! |
Chookstar chapter 6 . 11/30/2004 lol this guy is so uphimself it's ridiculous! I think i'm going to like him - just not as much as jesse. You're a great writer mate, seriously cause there's always a few lines in there i'm going to store away in the depths of my mind and whip out sometime should the opportunity arise! And i'm still reading... |
Chookstar chapter 5 . 11/30/2004 Wow i feel fully slack! I havn't computered it in days and then i come on and you've written like 5 new chapters! And for once in my life i am not going to skip to the last page to see what happens - i'm being so strong lol! I like the Jesse family history at the start, i love his character, i have a thing for the sarcastic ones! Maureen sounds hilarious too if i'm really bored tomorrow i might just go back and count how many times she says "oh mi god!" This should be interesting with this news random guy too...and so i read on! |
Jolly B chapter 9 . 11/29/2004 that was..hot. Lol. really good i liked it, longer chapters for the love of god. i hate being deprived! lolplz update soon. |
prisoner-of-the-night chapter 9 . 11/29/2004 I like it...its really kool the way you didnt just come out and say that Eve hit jess in the eye...you made it into something else...i Like it alot... Update soon :) |
KnotFamous chapter 9 . 11/29/2004 I'm So happy you decided to continue the story! I love it! Please update before the weekend, I CANT WAIT TO READ MORE! |
ErgoSchmergo chapter 9 . 11/29/2004 OMG! jesse sounds like a guy that i know...a guy that i've gone swimming w/...and played basketball against...in our swim suits! lol that was great, this story has awesome humor keep up the good work! and u r so evil, so so evil, but i guess u deserve a break! *unfortunately..mumble...mumble..* |
Cooties chapter 9 . 11/29/2004 WOW! This is such a great chapter! Jesse is so hot! And why was Clay being so cool? Maybe I like him now. Eve is so funny! Haha! I love her! Hope you update soon! |
FrozenWaterFaerie chapter 8 . 11/29/2004 how are you evil? |
LilLaTLuv chapter 9 . 11/29/2004 Hey! Great chapters! Sorry I didn't see them sooner but I was grounded for the weekend. Awesome! She thinks he's hot. I like Jesse best still, but why is it now that you made Clay sweeter? It's kinda weird. And is Greg gonna come in the picture? And when is America's Hottie coming around? Luv ya,Tashi :) |
Trmpetplaya1 chapter 9 . 11/29/2004 Wow. I really really liked that chapter. Dang, stupid hormones! -_-;; Oh well. Not only did I enjoy it, but it was well written. And very descriptive. Very nicely descriptive. *grin* Keep up the good work! _ -Kera |
DragonAiua chapter 9 . 11/29/2004 that is SO not fair...what ar we supposed to be doing while you are getting your break? |
blueangel87 chapter 9 . 11/29/2004 I love thsi story! It just keeps getting better! :D Keep it up ;) |
kungfu kitty chapter 9 . 11/29/2004 hahah, that was a fun chapter. keep them coming. :-) |
NoMoreTears chapter 9 . 11/29/2004 This is so brill! I absolutely love this story. You CANNOT make this the last update for this week. That's just mean. That's just evil. Dr Evil evil. I'm babbling. But please update soon. I want to stare at Jesse's abs myself ;) make them kiss and make up! NOW! til nxt time lady agatha |