Reviews for America's Sweetheart |
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gurl chapter 9 . 11/28/2004 its cute, amusing and its also fun to read. keep it up! pls update so0n! thanks. |
beve chapter 9 . 11/28/2004 o.m.g.!that is SOO good!..lol..ur so EVIL!...but ..thats why i like it!lol..erm..hurry n update!btw,if ur free could u review my fic,the rain that falls,pls?thnx!..nice fic!..she should see him naked more often!lol! |
rock 'n' roll junkie chapter 9 . 11/28/2004 *drools* Okay, let's get one thing straight people, Jesse's mine and mine only, j/k! lol, I love the story, because you just included like the best descriptions of Jesse. God he sounds so deliciously fine. I need to get away from the computer *almost caught licking it* LOL J/K I SWEAR! No please believe me, BELIEVE ME PLEASE, okay excuse my silly white ass hyperness lol. |
tarnished chapter 9 . 11/28/2004 *orgasms* Oh my god. You've really done it this time. I think.. I think I've lost my ability to form intelligent sentences. Oh my.. what have you done to me? I've officially lost my mind. I even think at one point reading this I almost suffocated myself in an attempt to drown out my laughter. Not. Working. At least I can say one thing; I'm no longer the only pervert. Eve rules. Now you must kill her off and replace me.. yes. Thats the plan. I even think - oh wait, hold on.. I'm visioning Bonds riding on a harley with no shirt on. Oh yummy... anyway! I would present you with a shiny plaque and thank you for not only making my pitiful life complete, but for being a godsend and having the fastest typing fingers known to man.. but, I'm broke. And you do deserve one hell of a break... Just dont keep my hormones hanging too long ;) |
insert funky name chapter 9 . 11/28/2004 OMG!i love this story! i mean it. its one of the best romances ive read in ages and that includs proper published books. one more thing: UPDATE! i am hooked |
d-unit chapter 9 . 11/28/2004 me likey. jesse sounds so fuckin hot, but i dont get the personality changes that he, eve, and clay all show. one minute jesse is mean or living up the bad boy image, the next he's a sweethart(by the by when did he get punched?); then eve is hating the two guys, then drooling over them (more so bonds than clay). then clay seems like an evil, arrogant, snobby kind of guy, who wants eve, but then leaves her in a room alone with his NAKED competition, and then is just curious to know if they had 'kissed and made up'. i dunno, i like the story, but the last few chapters leave me walking away somewhat confused. i feel like im missing something! but...jesse still sounds hot and no matter what, im looking forward to reading more descriptions of his body. thank you and good night. ~d-unit |
blondeonstilts chapter 8 . 11/28/2004 Wonderful Story. |
tarnished chapter 8 . 11/28/2004 NAKED BONDS! Please tell me the next chapter is going to start off with a detailed description of Bonds naked, so I can get through the fact you just ended this chapter in a cliffie. I'll cry otherwise. Or pretend to, same thing. Oh well. At least you mentioned him taking a shower. Wetness. YAY! And can I just say I lurrved Clay this chapter. I miss his arrogant wit, though. But still.. hehehe.. he got Eve mumbling with his angry eyes. Awesome. And hilarious, btw. So hows about that naked Bonds, eh? *wink wink nudge nudge* |
pixy-dizzy chapter 8 . 11/28/2004 After much debating, i have decided that I adore Clay. He's just so...so...so Clay-ish. UPdate soon, please! |
Trmpetplaya1 chapter 8 . 11/28/2004 AH! You ARE evil! Writing this wonderful story and updating and getting me all excited and then BAM! CLIFFHANGER! ...*sigh*... Oh well, I guess I'm just gonna have to tell you that I really like your story and that I would really really like it if you updated again. Soon. Maybe right now? (Ha ha, j/k; but seriously: good work _) -Kera |
Trmpetplaya1 chapter 8 . 11/28/2004 AH! You ARE evil! Writing this wonderful story and updating and getting me all excited and then BAM! CLIFFHANGER! ...*sigh*... Oh well, I guess I'm just gonna have to tell you that I really like your story and that I would really really like it if you updated again. Soon. Maybe right now? (Ha ha, j/k; but seriously: good work _) -Kera |
DragonAiua chapter 8 . 11/28/2004 you better not leave us hanging for very long. |
huh chapter 7 . 11/28/2004 wait, when did she punch him? when did he come on to her? im lost, sorry |
Jolly B chapter 8 . 11/28/2004 Hehe, i love drama! this is excellent! plz update again, i know you're a fast updater, but i need it now! lol. kiddingtoodles. |
Butterfli-kiss chapter 7 . 11/28/2004 I like Tori. She seems cool. She acts like my best friend does. Clay is too cocky though. Lol. Well I can't wait for the next chapter! |