|Reviews for America's Sweetheart|
| KnotFamous chapter 7 . 11/28/2004
This story is the best! I love it so much! Please continue!
| tarnished chapter 7 . 11/28/2004
Theres just something about this story that makes me so relaxed when I'm reading it, like one of my friends is telling me this funny story and I just sit there and laugh and smile and listen intently.. I think it might be because the characters you use remind me of my own friends. I love this Tori chick, completely hiliarious. I'm liking Eve more and more, espcially since she punched Jesse which I cant help but find hilarious. "I could send him to jail for this and he just completely screwed up the entire thing." Classic.
And really, such a big school like that and they cant even afford hamburger that isn't subject to Mad Cow disease? I almost lost my apetite. And for the record, I like Clay. He's all arrogant and.. sexified. But you know what they say, if he second best then hes like the rest. Actually I just made that up, its kinda crafty... but what I meant was, Bonds is better. So. Better. I think the next chapter should be centered on a very detailed Bonds taking a shower. Yep. And I'll shut up now.
| A fan chapter 1 . 11/28/2004
Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please dont kill this story. I realy love it! i think its an awesome idea for a story, and i really like Jesse :). anyways, this was a review to keep it going! i think if u finish it u should definitely publish it-i would buy it in a flash! so PLEASE continue it!
| DragonAiua chapter 7 . 11/28/2004
Oh well Clay might be fine as a character, but not as a PERSON :-P and I am liking Eve and Tori :-D
| blueangel87 chapter 7 . 11/28/2004
I love this story! :D Please write more soon
| blueangel87 chapter 2 . 11/28/2004
THis dtory's great so far except for one thing...its just a bit repetitive how you use the whole 'late intoduction thing' for not one, but both characters. Other than that Im really loving it! :D It's a great plot
| nala chapter 1 . 11/28/2004
i deleted your email then thought of something for you. re nz anti nuke thing, during the 60s and 70s our government sent navy frigates carrying cabinent ministers to protest nuclear testing in the pacific. after the bombing of the rainbow warrior by the french in auckland in 1985 we went nuke free (also after denying the americans to let a navy ship come into nz waters). the culmination of this entire thing was Primen minister david lange saying at the ofard debate (and this is really famous) "i can smell uranium on your breath" to an american dessenter. when a politican tries to reignite the anti nuke debate it is seen that it is a last resort to boost poll thing, how can a 15 or 16 year old have been on all these cool overseas advetures to better the world, and how do i get a free ticket off this island nation call aotearoa-nz?
| nala chapter 7 . 11/27/2004
i really need to talk to you about new zealand. it is a real shit hole that doesn't exactly live up to the clean green reputation. its in the middle of nowhere and is famous for 2 things, the All Blacks (who conveniatly thumped the french in the rugby this morning) and doing the fingers to the americans with our no nukes policy (long may it live). please try to be less positive about my country, but if u want to make that kiwi university dude (our equivalent to your colleges) go to otage, god is that the best uni ever and i can't afford to go. for listneing to my rant. i like your story, but find it difficult to follow all your changing points of views. i look forward to your updates
| Cooties chapter 6 . 11/27/2004
Cute chapter! I don't think I like Clay, he's arrogant and evil. I can't wait for the next chapter!
| BoredomKills0620 chapter 6 . 11/27/2004
Lol.I love this story!It's hilarious!Great,I tell you!Wonderful.I think Clay has some pretty amusing thoughts,though he's a /bit/ of a man-whore!XD I like Jesse more & Eve are cool together!That's who I'm going for..I hope you'll update soon(*NUDGENUDGEWINKWINK*).I'll see ya next chappie.
God Bless,Chelsea aka Sophomore .
| tarnished chapter 6 . 11/27/2004
I think this is my favorite chapter as well, even for the shortness, besides ch3 of course. You just cant help but love the cocky bastard. Well, I cant. (of course I still love Jesse, pfft, what kind of a question is that?) I couldnt help but laugh at the beginning, he sounded just like me. I have such a bad intolerance for caffeine, be near be and be subject to an aneurysm. Only, I dont own a Viper. Lucky shit.
Meh.. hey, by the sounds of it, *I'd* do this Clay anyday. Hair in the eyes? Yes. That smile? Oh yes. Tight ass? *melts* I'll just.. tape his mouth shut so he doesnt have the satisfaction of hearing his own voice. Oh hell, I'm getting hot over a fictional character. Kill me now.
Or.. update :)
| LilLaTLuv chapter 6 . 11/27/2004
Great update! Can't wait for the next. I'm still rooting for Jesse. He's so sweet and I love the bad boy vibe! Clay is such a bastard. Now when are you bringing in America's Hottie?
Luv ya,Tashi :)
P.S. UPDATE SOON, PLEASE!
| DragonAiua chapter 6 . 11/27/2004
lol, update soon (that tends to be what I say most). yah, and bring Clay down a few noches somewhere, just for the personnel safety :-P
(and I know what you mean about the 4H aggies...they are not my type, but fun to watch).
| rock 'n' roll junkie chapter 6 . 11/27/2004
lol shit that was awesome! Clay's so friggin' cocky, yet hilarious. Well done.
| rock 'n' roll junkie chapter 5 . 11/27/2004
Haha, this a good story! It's pretty funny. I like how your write Jesse and Eve. Very good. Keep up the great work!