Reviews for America's Sweetheart
Jolly B chapter 6 . 11/26/2004
Like, that was so FAST! Lol, i remember reading two chapters this morning. Well this chapter wasn't so long, but as long as you keep up the really fast updates, you're sweet.I like the whole Clay thinks he's all that but he's really a class 'A' jerk. Oh come on he is! The last few paragraphs were entertainig. What i can't understand is why guys dig virgins. I mean i've read loads of stories today talking about how guys want to 'pop a cherry'. lol. I guess it's because the dude knows she ain't a slut. makes me wonder. A guy is allowed to sleep around and a chick isn't? What kind of Bullshit is that? Lol, sorry if i'm boring you with my views on womanizers. I hate ' yeah great chapter. Update soon k. Toodles.
captain r3tardo chapter 6 . 11/26/2004
haha this is funny!hi...i'm a new reader...and i love this story! xDhope you post up soon!
Cooties chapter 5 . 11/26/2004
OMG! I love this story! Jesse is so awesome! He is naughty AND nice! How cute! I LOVE LOVE LOVE Eve! She is so awesome! I don't like Clay, he seems really annoying, but who knows he could be nice! I want to know more about this hottie Luke! Will we meet him? I hope so! This story is so awesome! Please update soon!
tarnished chapter 5 . 11/26/2004
Its about time I find an author that knows how to bring on the funny. Seriously, I was laughing throughout this entire story. I think the entire chapter 3 had me falling out of my chair in laughter.

And you ended this with a CLIFFIE! Shame on you! GRAR! I suppose this is where I insert the death threats and such, eh? Meh. Just hoping for an update real soon ;)
LilLaTLuv chapter 5 . 11/26/2004

I LOVE this story! You have GOT TO UPDATE! Seriously. I think Jessie is awesome, but I don't think I like Clay. I hope she ends up with Jesse! Eve is an awesome character. Jesse is so sweet and cool. And I love the bad boy thing. And I love the psychic-green-eye lady thing. That was cute! And Maureen is sweet.

Luv ya,Tashi :)
Shaylee chapter 5 . 11/26/2004
Really good, isn't the sister cute love her update soon
DragonAiua chapter 5 . 11/26/2004
I really like this chapter too *grins*

please post again soon :-P
pixy-dizzy chapter 5 . 11/26/2004
*chokes* Freaking hilarious, man. Aw...Jesse's a sweetie-pie. *coos as poor Jesse runs away screaming* Ahem. Anyway, I'm really enjoying this story. It's great, and well-written. One suggestion, though: It seems to be going a little quickly, but that might be just me. And it's only sometimes that it seems to be rushed. Otherwise, it's great.

Awesome, awesome work. I'm begging you to continue this and update soon!
Trmpetplaya1 chapter 5 . 11/26/2004
Yay! Love the story! Write more soon, K? _
MuffinMus chapter 5 . 11/26/2004
I really like this story. I think it's interesting, and i can't wait to read more... PLEASE update soon!
The Wandering Musician chapter 5 . 11/26/2004
Great story. I'm totally hooked. It is very well written and I can't wait for your next update.
Jolly B chapter 5 . 11/26/2004
Yeah i like this story! It keeps getting better and better. Plz update soon.
CocaColaRox chapter 4 . 11/26/2004
Aw! I really like Jesse. He seems so hot and sweet! Eve's mom is cool too. Update soon!
Butterfli-kiss chapter 4 . 11/26/2004
I love your story. It is really good. I can't wait to read the next chapter!
DragonAiua chapter 1 . 11/26/2004
:-) me likes. a lot of potential here
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